| "What To Do With An Amnestic Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooo! I've never read anything like that b4. ^_^ I Like! ^_^.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You always have been one of my favorite authors. I don't know what all that blah was about Shippo, he seemed perfectly in character to me. Nobody hates him, but he certainly can get annoying at times; after all, he's only seven. Well, okay, he's more like fifty, but comparable to seven in human years. Over all, I found this to be one of the most in-character, realistic scenarios I've ever read, and that's including my own stories. *wink* Seriously, though, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 12:57 CST
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That was fun!! Nice job!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 07:03 CST
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ph that was good! i loved it.
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Reviewed By: Qi On: November 20, 2006 04:10 CST
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Ok, it's clear that you despise, hate, loathe, and detest Shippo, but I have to say that it's distracting when you show it so stongly in what you write. You want to tell him off when he's bratty, so you're making the other characters do it. I'm not going to try and lecture you or anything about the fact that Shippo has good qualities along with the annoying ones because nothing I say will make you hate him less. I just thought you should know that your dislike is bringing down the quality of your work because it feels like you're trying to make everyone else hate him too. Now as far as the rest of the fic goes, I think it's kind of sad that Inuyasha won't get to remember his first time and that Kagome never really got to hear his real feelings about her before she and he went all the way. The amnesia idea is good though and I liked the way Inuyasha could smell himself on her and that's why he was trusting. It was a nice touch.
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Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have taken a moment of canon time and turned it into your own. All I could say was "awww" it was so sweet!! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your oneshots, they are all great. I wish that you would make a few of them into full-blown stories though. Anyway, that's your choice. Can't wait till you update your stories. :)
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Reviewed By: amhor56 On: November 19, 2006 20:43 CST
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I must say, this is a good story. OHHHH...a replay hu? Hehehe ok well nice job!
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