| "Love me, That's all I ask of you" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was pretty funny I could just imagine Sesshomaru's face when he got sat .
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In response to your questions, I think Naraku is always a good villain but if you want to create a new one that's good too - I agree with other readers that I don't think the villain should get a hold of Sessh'sxInu's kids, that's been done before, but a kidnapping thing would be quite good, since Sess is kind of a lord and all, who wouldn't want to blackmail him for something. - Kagome, yes I think should go back to her own time because I like her so I want everyone to be happy ^_^ - I don't know about Kougax Miroku though, I think that the Miroku & Sango pairing it too strong in my heart ^_^ - Update soon please! -- Shigure-san
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Title: responses to your note in aff
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj On: January 28, 2007 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i could no longer review in aff so i did it here - gen 11. Author Note! (sorry) Author: inhibitedloveofwriting Hits: 6316 ...so I am asking you guys some questions and I want to know the responses. 1.) Should Naraku be alive or dead? (If I previously stated that he was dead… then let us pretend he faked it like in the movie "Castle beyond the Looking Glass) i want Naraku dead. gone. forever. create a new villain. that would make it more exciting, dont you think? it might be harder since you have to develop a character but you get to develop him to your heart's content! if you do decide to have naraku, please, no rape scenes with inu- 2.) IF so, should he get a hold of InuYasha, Sesshomaru, or their child/children? no. that would be so cliche, wont it? why not have another person who wants something from sess (say, some land or artifact?) ... so like a kidnapping.... 3.) I plan on sending Kagome back to her time and not bringing her in again except once in a blue moon, so Should I put Miroku with Koga? yes. once in a blue moon for kagome - since she is a priestess after all. miroku and kouga sounds good to me. 4.) What about Sango? What should I do with her? I kind of want to avoid M/F for this story, but I will put it if I see no other way. Sango. did you want a F/F one? you could have kagome here.... if not, you could put in a hanyou who is a lord somewhere..... So now I need your help, leave me lovely reviews with your responses. Plus, one more thing before I forget. I NEED A BETA! Not just for InuYasha, but for the HP story I am working on… Hell I just need one period. i can beta for you. and yes, i am literate. how can i prove it... i dont know. i just dont capitalize in my reviews because i usually am in a hurry to type my review and i'm weird like that. i wont be like that when i review your material. i've done beta for some lj authors. your choice really... and only if you want to. i usually go through material much slower than my usual reading. but, i can promise a very fast turnaround. my work skeds may be bad and i cant do fast reviews then .... awaiting your next chappies
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Reviewed By: dreamskat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 13:25 CST
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OMG!OMG!OMG!H.O.T.T HOTT!And I (L) that some one finily told kagome off!HAHAHA!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 20:33 CST
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this chapter was totally amazing. i luved the lemon in it. lol. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Steel Butterfly430 On: December 14, 2006 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
May be a double review, but oh well. Did Kagome really think Yasha, being as blunt and annoying as he is, would really go with Maru? And another thing (maybe you'll be addressing it in a later chapter), but why is it when authors have Yasha with mated someone other than Kagome, they never make her take that damn necklace off. Maru just saw what it does and he doesn't make her take it off? *borrows Sango's boomerand and whacks kagome* I hope you aren't taking this as a flame. It's not meant to be. I've enjoyed this story. For some reason, the part with Yasha and Miroku walking to the castle, just the two of them, was interesting. Don't ask why, it just stuck out in my mind for some reason. A pissed off Maru, not able to vent and poison and kill the object of his annoyance? TOO FUNNY! I can just picture an angry demon lord holding her and you just KNOW she's gonna go flying. Nope. He's denied. I can't wait to see how this story turns out. ~SB
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 10:20 CST
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kool chapter. bout time kagome got beat up 4 all the "sit" commands. lol. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot when do you update next.?
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 20:58 CST
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He really needs to ge that blasted thing off!!! I really like where this is going so far. I can't wait to the next chapter though.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 18:18 CST
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loved this chapter!!! id have 2 say this is the best sessinu fic ive read. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 15:55 CST
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great story so far. update soon. i wanna c wat sesshomaru has 2 sat 2 inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 16:12 CST
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Sweet! Update soon! Inu has such pretty lil dreams doesn't he? ^_^
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Title: OOOOhhhhhhh!!!! A new hot yoai!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Attention everyone there is a hot new SessxInu story on the scene, and it starts out hot n heavy! a 10 on the pant-o-meter! I'm putting this on my favorites list and I'll be looking out for the new update(s)~ B reading U!
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