| "Time And Time Again" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: im_alive On: March 06, 2007 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god they got Richie those bastards! No one knows where he's at and those two freaks are so horrible I don't even want to think about it. I refuse to read the next chapter at least until tomorrow. I can't read it in the state I'm in. And friggin Junior what happened to all his maturity? Friggin' boy I swear so easily distracted. And poor Virgil I don't want him to lose his foot I'm having horrible 'Misery' flash backs. You want some inspiration for gore I say read that book, not the movie they take all the really horrible parts out, it's was too much I swore of horror for a good while after I read that. And poor Mr. Hawkins doesn't know what's going on anywhere he just wants his baby back. When are you going to give him his baby back? And please tell me he's going to have all his parts in one piece and breathing? It's good but I can't believe this where is the light woman? Ignore me I'm being overly emotional.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: March 06, 2007 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while seince I reviewed but I'm glad there's something to review. Everything is so weird and at times confusing only because everything seems like a mystery. Poor Rishie has to see something he always thought was right turned into how everyone else saw it, something wrong. It sucks more that Hotstreak was there for that discovery it's like him seeing one of his weaknesses. As for what Richie heard I'm wondering if he's not seeing into the other world and if he is how is he doing it and why all of a suuden? I don't like they way they're all seperated and I can only hope Hotstreak gets to Richie. As for the man in Black what is he's deal what with the urgency of possing a body? I can't help but feel like it has something to do with Richie. As for Virgil and Junior I don't know if I'm proud Virgil can look past all that for his purpose or if he's stupid for not being a little more careful. Though Junior is still confusing me because he seems so helpful and brotherly but it's really hard to look past what he did.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 00:50 CST
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So, there really is a world of the saved, perhaps even time has been changed so they do not feel the effects of what has happened, and interfere too soon? This story is a dark twist ont eh themes of static shock, and one I wholeheartedly approve of. Except for Ritchie's past, that sucks. Still, you wrote it well.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 18:23 CST
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Well I'll be damned if that is not some fucked up shit! I can't even see how a world this screwed up came to be, no offense. Still, I've been reading, and thinking, and this is not my cup of tea. Still, I like your other work, and this one too. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 21, 2007 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Richie has no idea what to think so he over thinks and still doesn't get what he's looking for. As for Junior I really don't know what to think about him. He's sick and he knows it but also also knows how sick the others are when that can't see it. So that makes him the most sane out of the bunch in one way because he denys nothing but he is like the worst out of all of them. I'm confused about Junior because now he has two sides but he is aware of both sides, so what spilt personalities? And what's going to happen now that all the secrets are out? I'll keep an eye out for an update.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 09, 2007 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter ten: Now I'm all caught up and now sets in the waiting the horrible horrible waiting. Those boys have some issues they always have to have some issues but I guess they wouldn't be them if they didn't. And those goes 'next time.' I can't believe how Junior was getting all partenal it's different from him but you know I had an aww moment. And Hotstreak can't call RichiePrincess without looking at himself first after all he's the one that got all huffy by what Richie said to Junior, I thought he didn't care? Anyway I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 09, 2007 11:29 CST
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Chapter Nine: I have a feeling I might actually like Junior in this one. Yeah hestill has that punk attitude but at least he has some direction in his life. and am I the only onethat thinkshis concern over Richie is cute? This direction you're taking with Junior is very unexpected but I like it. Who knew you could take a guy who was such a in your first part and make him somewhat decent. I like it very much.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 09, 2007 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch 8: So you killed Shiv right off the start? I mean yeah he was a little crazy on the series but dang he was gone in this fic. Poor Shiv. If they had all the positions that Richie and Virgil have been in how come they didn't attack them sooner like how the man in black did Richie? And where is Maria getting all this information without the other side stopping her? As for that lemon wow and more wow. Those two really didn't care about anything else but wow. You know what I like about this fic is that they don't have their memories to stop them, at least yet(I never know with you). And I really liked when Hotsteak thought'next time'
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 04, 2007 15:00 CST
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Chapter 7: Oh who's the non Ghoul? I'm wondering if he is who I think he is but maybe not..hmm. Richie and Hotstreak seem to be getting a long as much as they can with them being them. Hotstreak walking in on what he did must have been something. I wonder if Richie is going to find out seeing as how Backpack did see him.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 04, 2007 14:28 CST
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Chapter 6: Boys are stupid that's all I can say. All that fighting for nothing stupid stupid boys. That key is starting to sound more interesting than Virgil's. How come Virgil got the easy key and Richie still has to find out what his goes too. The man in black was that guy in the window from Richie's past life right? Why does he look normalish and did he get stronger or what? Also what is his obssession with Richie it seems a little prevy to me.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 04, 2007 13:42 CST
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Chapter Five: Oh man you made me cry with the last bit. You're so evil now I've been through almost every emotion there is reading your fics. And you just had to put in that scence with Hotstreak and the police station, very proud of your action scence huh? I'm glad they all got away from Harley but I don't know if it was wise to leave him alive I just know he's going to cause trouble.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 04, 2007 13:15 CST
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Ch.4: Oh crap I have to leave a quick review cuz I have to see what happens next. Poor Virgil, poor Richie, danm Harley.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 04, 2007 12:43 CST
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Chapter Three: Aww Backpack is Richie's baby. He was all worried even when he was hurt, that boy has a one track mind it seems. As for Hotstreak what differences did it make kid or adult it was the same pain for human beings so he should feel some guilt. And this whole darkness business sounds evil it makes me think it could get to the others too. As for Maria what is that lady up too?
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 03, 2007 14:05 CST
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Chapter two is finished and I liked it. I knew it was Maria for a minute there I thought it might have been his mom but I was like water no matter how dirty equals Maria. As for the superhero thing I love Batman he's my favorite but I'm sad to say he deals with mostly electronics so I can see him as having died, but Superman shouldn't be dead man of steel and all that, but I hate him so if he is he is. And Richie and Virgil are stupid boys like most they have issues with always having to compete and they are just stupid boys. But I love them anyway. Why does Richie have to be so mean to Backpack poor little thing. Anyway I'm done for now but I'm read more later.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 03, 2007 13:38 CST
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Okay so the holidays are over I can now read anything dark and angsty. You sure did a lot of updated but that alright just more for me to read. Of course it's going to take a while cuz I'm sick but yay anyway. As fo the fic I'm so happy to see backpack I love the relationship between it and Richie. Poor Richie it's just the intro and people are already after him. As for Virgil it's nice to see you go through the route of what could have happened in the series and put it into your fic. I think it makes him more real to be so angry and to let it out. I like it especially how you got all the technical stuff out of the way real fast.
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