| "Past the pain and into hearbreak" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 14:41 CST
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i loved it update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 17:49 CDT
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eh i dont mind the wait i havent been able to get to a computer anyways... oh well yay fluffy took kagome away from Inu but what about shippo
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YAY!!!!! a new chapter!!! im happy :P but ha i had tp go ver the story seen it was a while go -_- anyways LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 14:29 CDT
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interesting story... like it so far... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: squeefan On: June 02, 2007 03:11 CDT
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omg! im so ready for more! longer chapters would be good and worth the wait........
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awww u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 21:56 CDT
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YAY1!!! an update yes yes yes kepp it going dont stop!!!!!I really hope that you get over the rest of your writer's block soon but for now yay!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 21:13 CDT
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this is good update soon plz
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 17:00 CDT
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The chapter was worth the wait. The plot thickens and so now I am forever hooked.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oki so im getting into it lol its just really interesing!!!!! please update soon! and forget that my first comment is there ^-^ and ummmm *cough* why was it short??
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Title: WRITE
Reviewed By: SUFFERING//KAGOME On: April 04, 2007 00:07 CDT
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WRITE MORE *CRY CRY*
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Title: Aww
Reviewed By: tsubasa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were some mistakes with your spelling but it wasn't so bad that I couldn't understand it all. Watch out for the small things like, try not to mix them up, such as,"away" and "a way". I enjoyed the story it was a bit heartbreaking to know that was his choice. To be honest I've read one too many Kagome/Inuyasha pairing ( although that's the pair I like the best ), don't let the illogical reasons of another put you down. A majority of us think your work is great. And believe me, I think you've improved quite a bit from your previous work. Keep up the good work and I would hope to read the next chapter soon. I must know what he does.
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