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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: InuKaglover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2024 14:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just so good! I was trying to figure out what was going on
and why Kagome was acting so OOC. I really liked how it ended and
explained that they were role playing. So good!!!
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Reviewed By: kirr1001 On: May 05, 2012 09:25 PDT
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As I read this trought, the whole time I was thinking "Was gotten into Kagome??? She's clearly not herself! ... Or is she...?" When I started reading the end, my mouth turned up into huge smile :D You really got me there, what a surprise! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2011 19:35 PDT
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Your update of your older stories proves to me that even back then you were amazing. Once again, your story was fantastic. |
Reviewed By: SakuraRyuu On: August 04, 2011 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember reading this a long time ago, but I didn't realize it was yours. I still really enjoyed it. :) |
Title: Thought I should log in to review
Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 10:13 PDT
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Wowzers! This was a little hard to get through at times. I was actually mortified that Kagome had suddenly developed a split personality and was physically hurting her hanyou. I truly felt relief when she threw that crop away. Only to have the added twist at the end of 'bedroom role-play'. Perfectly plotted my dear! The ending made the whole thing playful and endearing. Kagome likely had a really tough time taking on the 'mistress' role as she detests Inuyasha being hurt. Good thing for youkai healing abilities. Only a caring and passionate couple could pull this off with niether one feeling hurt afterwards. |
Reviewed By: Kodiaq. Kitty On: April 10, 2011 10:10 PDT
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Wowzers! This was a little hard to get through at times. I was actually mortified that Kagome had suddenly developed a split personality and was physically hurting her hanyou. I truly felt relief when she threw that crop away. Only to have the added twist at the end of 'bedroom role-play'. Perfectly plotted my dear! The ending made the whole thing playful and endearing. Kagome likely had a really tough time taking on the 'mistress' role as she detests Inuyasha being hurt. Good thing for youkai healing abilities. Only a caring and passionate couple could pull this off with niether one feeling hurt afterwards. |
Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 15:43 PDT
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THAT WAS EPICCCC
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 19:15 PDT
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Well that was different. I don't usually read this type of story but since I liked all of your others I decided to give it a try. Had me fooled until the end when they revealed it was role-playing. Until that point I thought you had gone really out of character when usually you get the characters dead on. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: LADY SILVERFOX AKA MYCHELLE 79 On: December 17, 2009 11:31 PST
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good story please write more please!!! u know she could of handcuffed him 2 her bed but oh well. oh god she gotta tell sango!!!! maybe sango could do something like this 2 miroku!!! think about it wouldn't it b funny 2 see sango doing something like that 2 miroku?
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Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 04:35 PDT
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totally sexy and kinky. LOVE IT.
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 18:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was AWESOME! I love the way that it ended. Perfect. Makes me want more. Yumm Yumm! So Inuyahsa likes to be dominated huh...
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 05:39 PDT
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boy, that's another face of kagome you showed us. i really, really like your style!
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Reviewed By: Sumisung [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was an unexpectedly great short story. I am very pleased that I stumbled upon it. I love how the story turned out to be a fantasy played out between a mated Inuyasha and Kagome. At first I thought 'Ok so Kagome has either got a part in a play or she is dressing up for some sort of costume party', but when she travels through the well and starts picking on Inuyasha my thoughts immediately changed to 'Oh my god! Kagome has finally snapped, not in a good way either and defiantly not in a way which I would have expected.' I was rather shocked at first due to the new dominatrix type Kagome, but then again I think Inuyasha was as well. It was interesting to see the conflict Inuyasha was going through with regards to what his Inu yokai instincts were telling him, his cognitive and conscious thoughts and his body's own natural reactions to the whole situation. The whole pleasure verses pain scenario is always fun to see and it fitted in very well this particular story. The emotions were portrayed very well and helped to bring the story to life. I was a little bit sad though, that Inuyasha seamed to give in a little too easily and conceive in the end, becoming the submissive puppy that Kagome wanted. This is due to the fact that Inuyasha is rather proud and extremely stubborn, I was thinking as I continued to read that he could distract himself. My mental though was 'I'm sure that if you really wants to, you could bite your tongue or something, to distract your self from Kagome's ministrations, so do something already, don't give up Inuyasha.' But on the other hand I was also secretly cheering Kagome on, but only a little bit. Your story kept me captivated right through till the end and I must say the last little part was a total surprise. The little extra bit at the end, which reveals that it was all a little role-play fantasy between them and that they were mated brought a smile to my face and warmed my heart. It was the last thing that I had expected and it was a truly pleasant surprise. All in all I found this story surprising and a pleasure to read. So please keep up the fabulous work and I look forward to reading more of you work in the near future. All the best Sumisung
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 16:00 PDT
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Hahahaha!!! That was a fantastic angle for a story! I've never read one like that before. Wonderfully done! Wonderfully written! Amazing. Great lemon. I'm really starting to like your style...
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 23:09 PST
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one of the best pieces of smut out there!
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Reviewed By: Hotaru no Aimori (Firefly of the forest of love On: January 11, 2008 11:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
while reading this i recently experienced laughing and crying at the same time. splendent...you've done this to me too many times!
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 07:10 PDT
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oooh, vewwy good! >.< Nice and smutty ^_^ -- shigure-san
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Title: Woooo-de-frickin'-hoooo!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 16:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW THE HELL DID I MISS THIS? You really had me going there. And I thought I was the only nut out there. This one was a riot! "I'm the leader, it's my mission, my destiny, I'm the alpha, me!" - that was great. "Faster, I say!" - even better. Great little twist at the end. Yum. Loved it... I say!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 17:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. i totally love all of ur stories i've read, but so far, this one is the absolute best. the ending was a total suprise and made it that much better. ur talent w/ writing inu/kag fanfics is amazing. i only wish that i might one day come up with one story that comes even close to what u've done.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 10:48 PST
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That was great!! Loved the surprise ending, too! Kagome made a good dominatrix -- Inu had every right to be scared. Hope you write some more one-shots like this one.
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 18:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeowch! This was refreshingly original =) They must be really great actors XD Poor Inuyasha, thought his woman had gone crazy. I loved the ending, perfect. I'd love to see Inuyasha extract revenge ^.~
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Title: WoW!!
Reviewed By: Gaskin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 00:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One Word: DDDAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was HOTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: naughtgrl On: November 30, 2006 07:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, that was so hot. you had me completely fooled. that is some real original plot stuff reight there. power to ya. you in fact inspire me to write more on my current story.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 23:57 PST
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Wow... I'm sorry I can't seem to describe it better... but WOW! I loved it! It was incredible. So he asked for it huh. Interesting. I hope you come up with more of stuff like this!
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Reviewed By: luna_sea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 20:48 PST
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WOOO!! That was great! And that ending!! Totally didn't see that coming ^_~ Let me know WHEN you write another one of those cause that was awesomely good!
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple (nsi) On: November 26, 2006 19:25 PST
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WOW! I must say, that when I was reading it, I was thinking, "Oi, Kagome wouldn't and shouldn't act like this" but the ending!! Hell yeah, I loved that, and it made the whole story work. Excellent (like always)
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Title: giggle giggle!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 18:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! that was a shocker at the end but the perfect ending! oh you have a creative mind i would like to see the things that go in your head because my god! that was a good one and once again i did not grade you of your spelling i just gave you a 10 because i felt like it and truly i do not know if you have any mistakes in it i just give a 10 in everything because thats how much i enjoyed your writing but if you think you have some mistakes and you wanna ask somebody don't ask me, i suck ass i english ^-^ but really keep up the great writing because if you wanna get somewhere in life you have to start small sometimes and your on a damn good track so the best of luck if you wanna become a writer! ^-^
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 17:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! The ending was worth the rest. I was surprised and thought this was a saucy piece of work. I love the mating mark and little dialouge at the end. Now if only I can find a hanyou to tie up for myself...booo. Great work! You have a way with words as always!
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Title: Oh Snap
Reviewed By: Shiva_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 16:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the title says, this is some good piece of work here. Who'd a thought Kagome of all people could be like, like...me? Cause damn, I have the same outfit and it does wonders. I hope you have more of this kind of stuff and Kagome with a crop...awesome! She sure whipped Inuyasha good, literally, maybe she could use that thing instead of the arrows, she's pretty good with it. Make some more of these stories. Ja ne and Peace out Shiva
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