| "Together at Christmas" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Forgive Me
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm re writing the last chapter because I realize it's really really bad even for a first timer. I wrote it really early in the morning {like 2:00 am} so I was just trying to hurry and get it done. I'm re writing it in my free time so I hope you'll forgive me and re-read it when you get a chance!
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Reviewed By: i'm bushey brow1113 On: December 23, 2006 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story please write more sashina stories
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Reviewed By: Secretary On: December 19, 2006 14:06 CST
Comment/Review:
i want copies too.
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Title: Xand Dagger
Reviewed By: Xand Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo, great fic all in all, i really enjoyed the story and i hope that you do come around to making a sequel. Or a fic with SasHina pairings, great job. From a BIG FAN.
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Title: hi...
Reviewed By: sara person On: December 17, 2006 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made a lotta grammer mistakes tsu >< ..... even though i swear i will regret ever saying this... not that i want what happened to be in more detail but the over all story should be like a little more overall. >< cant believe i just said that. the pace of the story is unsteady and sometimes its skow and sometimes fast... steady out the pace the story goes and slow it down a bit... still cant believe you wrote that chapter though >< PERV!!
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Reviewed By: i'm bushy brow 1113 On: December 15, 2006 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter!!! Can't wait for the update!! Your #1 Fan Kim-Chan
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Title: PLZ UPDATE
Reviewed By: XAnd Dagger On: December 15, 2006 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLAZ UPDATE, THIS FIC IS SOOO ENJOYABLE
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh fine i will review... u know u shouldn't beg for people to review, it ain't pretty. Well it's an interesting story i'll give u that, and wat i would really give it is an 8.5 outa 10, just to let u know. I admit i don't like all of the couples, being couples, but this story-line makes up for it.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: Xand Dagger On: December 12, 2006 05:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do enjoy this fic, its so sweet. Eventhough i prefer a NaruHina fic, I think that you have done vrey well with this story. Keep it up and hats off. PS. UPDATE SOON PLZ XD
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Reviewed By: i'm bushey brow1113 On: December 11, 2006 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story maybe garra is in her room i love this story.
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Reviewed By: Secretary On: December 09, 2006 13:04 CST
Comment/Review:
lol,what was it that you were gonna put in here that i said? i forgot XDDDD
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Reviewed By: i'm busheybrow1113 On: December 09, 2006 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a i don't evan know how to call it great isn't the right word for it it is more like incretable story i love it i love it i love it
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Reviewed By: CM2_Sasuke On: December 07, 2006 23:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Good job Tsu... i mean Bio Uotani. You are a awsome writer keep up the good work.^^
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going its a good fic espically 4 this season
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Reviewed By: Secretary On: December 03, 2006 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
i absolutely loved that sweat shirt,it seemed so natural, and you incorperated some more modern stuff into naruto with it, because they ARE a modern civilization, kudos on that. :D
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