| "Medical Inquiries by Dr. Tofu" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lami On: December 23, 2007 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is abysmal, are you ten? I dont need to critique this, go read any fanfic, even a bad fanfic is lightyears away from this, do you ever even read? i doubt you even so much as touched a ranma book. even Fox fanfics are better than this, this is the poorest oocest shit i have ever laid eyes upon, please dont try again untill you read at least 100 fanfics and you reread this afterwards.
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 10:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was good until it got to the part where Kasumi, Ranma and Tofu ended up dead. Yes ... I hate endings like that! Still ... on the whole it was good.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh, you're evil. I love it. I love the way you corrupted all the characters. Can't wait to see the cunning plans of the Tendo sisters to deal with the situation at hand.
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Title: Another fan ...
Reviewed By: A117 On: November 30, 2006 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree. Please continue ... On the other hand ... make Kasumi *desire* Ranma more than anything else in her life ... boy ... is she going to get really evil^_^
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Title: Akane being sad?
Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the interaction between Ranma and Ono - please focus on that next chapter. The other fiances have to be smashed since Ranma is a married woman - strong and undefeatable in her marriage with Ono - I hope... Anyway -love that you are publishing here. Its a great read!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: nea On: November 28, 2006 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The name of that song is 'I write sins not tragedies' by panic! at the disco. Your story is pretty cool, can't wait to read more. I really enjoy it!
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