| "Thin Line of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tis is gonna be a good story oh and btw u posted the same thing in ch.3 as ch.2
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 06:31 CST
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Interesting! Really looking forward to her meeting the detectives and to seeing what all her abilities are. The vampire angle is great! So, who are the dead detectives? Kuwabara and ------? (I assume.) Looking forward to some good Hiei/Kag interaction! Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 22:44 CST
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It's getting better,and better!Keep writing.Just make it clear on who it is that died,cause i'm guessing Genkai,and Kuwabara, but who knows,but you. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aRE THE MEMBERS KURABARA AND GENKI? (sp)
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks interesting please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 16:33 CST
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Please update soon!I think you have a good story going.Please add the next chapter(s) soon.I love Kag/Hiei pairings.
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