| "Kyou's Mouse" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: fe F On: June 27, 2005 23:38 CDT
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you are a messed up individual. splinters in your ass ISNT cool you freak
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Reviewed By: sooooooo.... On: January 13, 2005 18:02 CST
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thats probably one of the most goddamn weird things...ive ever read. sticks...mice... did you just write this as it popped into your head? planning a fic with that kinda...strange content is just a bit...disturbing. ON THE GOOD SIDE! it was freshly original! VERY...original.
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Reviewed By: aaaaaaaaaah...yeah On: January 13, 2005 17:59 CST
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Reviewed By: Darkness's minion On: August 20, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooh, I didn't notice your name till you mentioned Angel Sanctuary in the author's note (I absolutly loved pfft!) Eee, another master piece!! ^o^ Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: JesPaiTha On: April 19, 2003 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I hope you make another Yuki/Kyou fic. This is probably the best one I've read yet, never saw Yuki so crewl! |
Reviewed By: Jessie On: April 11, 2003 09:26 CDT
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No one, and I mean no one, would possibly enjoy having a stick shoved up their ass. And I've got a few mice that I'm sure would dearly love to do you damage for shoving one in Yuki's mouth.
The writing was fine, and the general premise was humorous and had the potential to be a really well done fic. However, there were a few things that distracted me from the story. Number one of which would be really poor rat charactarization. You mention several times that Yuki smells bad and hasn't taken a bath in a month. Rats are actually cleaner than cats. They bath several dozen times a day. And they don't smell bad. They smell like sandalwood. I would bet Yuki probably smells pretty yummy.
I liked your idea for the fic, and your writing was good, but I think you could have pulled it off a lot better if you'd taken the time to think about what you were writing. No one enjoys having their rectum torn, *shudders* |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm... i like it... its kool... the roof scene is so cute... hm... |
Reviewed By: Polka dot On: June 15, 2003 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that certainly was different, rather sick, definitely painful sex. |
