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Reviewed By: randi On: October 09, 2007 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I thought this was a really interesting idea! Please write some more of this soon so that I can see if Sakura ends up having a conflict between Sasuke and Naruto... and if something bad happens to Naruto! Plus I would really love to see a lemon or at least a good lime. It seems like you would be able to write a really good one. ;P I hope you haven't given up on this fic yet!!
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel37 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!! i just hope nothing bad happens 2 naruto love ur story hope u make other ones of narusaku
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Reviewed By: luis6556 On: June 13, 2007 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come one make another chapter or atleast post next story continuing this one
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 18:21 CDT
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I knew it you said you will be posting your new story in a couple of weeks and it has been alittle over 3 months now and still yo haven`t posted it and I doubt you will thats what sucks with these authors today they lie alot to you one thing but never do it so thats why this is the last tme I leave a review because I am not going to waste my time lookig and hoping you would actually get off you rear and post your new story if there actually was one
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Reviewed By: Lord_Inuyasha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 09:28 CDT
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This story has to be followed all the way to the end!!! Dont abandon us please! I have read too many fics that have great storylines then are abandoned and there is never any completion to them. You've got something good going with this story and I'd like to see it finished. Hope to see an update soon. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: de de dee On: March 09, 2007 17:32 CST
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my god i love this story. please post the next soon. and i sincerly hope you don't do what spiritwolf30 said. that would stink.yay new story!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 19:05 CST
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Truely wonderful^_^ I cannot wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: copycatcapycot On: February 06, 2007 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic is very interesting, although I am disappointed at the lack of sex scenes. A word of advice: if you want more reviewers, then make the chapters more sexy and perverted. People love that, but I'm not a hentai. I just notice that the most perverted stories often have the most reviewers.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 13:42 CST
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I really really like this story I was happy when I saw it had finally been updated about time so what your next story is going to be Naruto and Sakura pairing so will your new story continue where this story leftoff at I hope so if so cool I can`t wait to read it what will the name be ok and you said it will be up in a couple weeks what do you mean b that because when some authors say that it doesn`t get posted for probably couple of months when they say couple of weeks so when will it be oh well I guess I will have to wait to find out I have a feeling it will be posted in a couple of months oh well keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: ref346 On: January 30, 2007 19:01 CST
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This story rocks keep writing
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Reviewed By: de de dee On: January 18, 2007 16:12 CST
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i concur with spiritwolf30.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 11:32 CST
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Come on and update already or are you going to leave it I hope you dn`t because this is actually a good story so PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 15:07 CST
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I really really like this story I usually don`t read a Naruto and Sakura fic because for some reason I don`t like that pairing but after reading this story I actually like it now and damn I love Kakashi well not in that way I just love the way he is and the way ppl make to be a smartass and really funny anyways please update soon oh yeah what is the name of the story you are working on that won`t be posted yet and what will the pairing beoh well keep u the great work
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 11:47 CST
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very good I loveit please continue to update!!!
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Reviewed By: chako On: December 12, 2006 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my 1 comment ,well i made it in such hurry so i'm given u another one.i totally like the naruto/sakura thing and i hope u are still making this story.i don't care what u think but u haveeee 2 finish the story.I'M BEGGING U PLEEEASE!!!well that's all either than that u'r story just terrific.
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