| "Naruto of the Mirage" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: black fox dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 12:22 CST
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update please it has been way to long and i hate cliff hangers. this is a good story you should continue it.
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Reviewed By: GameGod On: September 05, 2008 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it's been a really long time since this story has beed added to. Please don't tell me it's been abandoned. I really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Bahizret On: February 11, 2008 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cmon just show me the end :p great story so far just started reading it a few days ago :) i(m not subscribed to this site but its the 3th story i found here and its by far the best :)
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Reviewed By: hippy34 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 12:00 CST
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hey love the story but jw what good will the chaos training do? the only way naruto will fight order is if they take the kyubbi from him wich will kill him so u need a MAJOR loop hole for tht to work unless he has jaryia weaken the seal sooo much they kyubbi can escape
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 19:33 CST
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"The Usual Suspects" is my favorite movie of all time. With a name like 'The Magician' I thought of Iruka like another "Prestige" character, but I can totally see him as Kevin Spacey. This was great. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf32 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 14:55 CST
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I was wondering when were yougoing to update your other story that is really good the story called "True Hyuuga Genius" why I am asking is because well I am sorry to say it but this story is starting to get boring I am sorry ut I really really like the story True Hyuuga Genius far better that is IF you will ever update it hell you told me yo were going to but never do so please actually update it please
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 21:40 CST
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That was really good. I'm slightly confused about whats going on... but I'm assuming you will be explaining some things. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 18:46 CDT
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Your new chapter was pretty good and well I hope you don`t take this the wrong way but I am starting to feel like I would rather read your story called True Hyuuga Genius but I don`t know it kinda seems like this story is getting kinda boring where Naruto seems to be very very strong with all those bloodlines I love that yo have Anko as Naruto`s mother and Sasuke even well I actually like him in this story but in truth I hate him and wish he would die like in your other story I loved it when Narut`s team well I mean Haren`s team knocked him out of the Chuunin exam or did I read that wrong its been awhile since an update I cann`t remember and I am really sorry about this review and I was wondering in the other Naruto or Bleach story what will they be about will how will Sasuke act in that story oh well I hope you will update your True Hyuuga Genius story soon I love that story
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: July 11, 2007 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens. So the Akatsuki leader actually shows up? I want to know whats going to happen once more PLEASE UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 21:05 CDT
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Well, thats a new way of writing how Gaara gets captured by Akatsuki. I'm really interested in seeing what happens next. Especially with Sakura. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I would have reviewed sooner but i was on vacation!! I luvs as always!!! update soon! maybe sakura won't loose her arm after all...
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: May 25, 2007 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Update Update! I love this story I want to know whats going to happen update soon.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great. Its suspens filled and unpredictable. The bloodline copyer is well explaned and orignal. I have a few question about Naruto's Sakashima Mangekyou Sharingan does he ever use it or is it reserved for Itachi, and dosn't he have the Tsukuyomi since he activated it when Itachi use it on him? Ans does the Sakashima Mangekyou Sharingan mess with the ussers normal eyesight? Please answer these questions in your next chapter.Wich I'm looking forward to.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 00:23 CDT
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Wow I thought chapter 24 was good it kinda sucked that Sakura lost an arm oh well please update soon I cann`t wait to read more of this story and the story True Hyuuga Genius now that story I wouldn`t mind reading more of heck its been so long sice I read it I cann`t remember where at in the story you stoped at so please update them soon PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yess! I just luv this story! Can't wait for the next chap! sakura lost an arm? and she might take dd's? eewww and coool! Update as soon as possible! And don't forget your other fic true hyuuga genius! ~TS~ later...
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