| "The Dance Floor" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gothic Angel 7 On: February 16, 2007 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! Hehe I love it! Write more PLEASE! *angel like eyes look at you with a lower pouting lip* YA! lol I miss you :( hehe ttyl I hope. Hinty. Squirrel. Love ya like a sister
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 17:36 CST
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HAha.. "will come soon"..... hahaha.. sorry .. dirty mind..
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: fullmetal19 On: February 11, 2007 21:15 CST
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update update i demand it NOW, just kidding but please update soon or i might just die kay love ya bye =)
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Reviewed By: tamie On: February 11, 2007 21:12 CST
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your good, i love the way you end your chapters it keeps me wanting more. please update soon please.
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Title: OMGosh
Reviewed By: jujubean On: February 11, 2007 21:09 CST
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you just have to write more, i hope Dai gets on the dance floor with sato soon i'm getting hot just thinking about it oh yeah.
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Reviewed By: marevil On: February 11, 2007 21:04 CST
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i loved it i want to see whats next please i beg you write more ( i'm on my hands and knees begging)
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Title: this is getting good
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 21:02 CST
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*sniff sniff* this was really good and just when i think the fun is about to start the chpater ends. i want more please.
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Title: LEMON!
Reviewed By: plusher [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME WANTS LEMONS! Please update! I will love you so much if you just update! (even though i'm a girl and i don't swing that way)
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 11:34 CST
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REview pwople!! REview!!!
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Reviewed By: badgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i live it! plz write more. plz and i do but plz write more and soon as possible
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Title: update
Reviewed By: marevil On: January 16, 2007 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more pretty please w/ cherry on top(i'm doing the puppy dog eyes) i really hated when the girls inturrpted. i wanted dai and sato to really bump and grind on the dance floor and later on have really hot monkey yaoi sex. so please update soon kay. i love lemon and whoever doesn't then screw them.
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Title: this really rocks
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 21:03 CST
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i say "HELL YEAH LEMON LEMON YA" :) anyway this chapter was really good so please keep going. and i love lemon stories so i'm 100% fine with it.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 21:20 CST
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UPDATE ONEGAI~!^_^
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 18:45 CST
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i'm a big fan of Dai x Sato. so i think you should write more. its really good.
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