| "Bloodline: Descendents of the Digidestined" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Canus On: July 24, 2003 18:25 CDT
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Any chance of seeing the next chapter before the end of the summer? |
Reviewed By: Lewis Wick On: May 28, 2003 09:50 CDT
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Yeah, I am, but not as much as hoped. I'm about two-thirds of the way complete on it. I'll get it done as soon as possible. Thankfully, I've got more time on my hands, so I can probably get it done soon.
- Lewis Wick, NOT involved with the "American Idol" debaucle... Precious Florida voters... |
Reviewed By: 786518 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 19:03 CDT
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Any progress on the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Lewis Wick On: February 25, 2003 08:02 CST
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Yeah, it's been ages since I updated that thing... I should do that.
Right now, I'm off to a quick start on Chapter 15... Let's all hope it stays quick...
As for that fusion comment, I had plans for some sort of 'super-fusion,' but it's changed some since then. *Hint* Try combining 02 fusion with 03 fusion, and that's all I'm going to say...
- Lewis Wick |
Reviewed By: Roketsdg34 On: February 22, 2003 08:43 CST
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So anyway this good funny chapter. Also making Gatomon and Patamon evolve like that/ Stefan turned out alright after all. I wonder what that mass of floating Data of Attonerymon combine with Oblivionmon is going to be. It's probably going to be awhile before Lily regains her senses. I went to your website and a list of characters and pictures. You had some Joggross or Fusion evolutions. Was that your original idea from the begining or will it happen later on. |
Reviewed By: Lewis Wick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's here, just as the description says!! Took me a while, but I finally did it!! Comments are welcome...
- Lewis Wick |
Reviewed By: Roketsdg34 On: February 17, 2003 19:46 CST
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I know I haven't review the last chapter, but I'm wondering if Lily is going to stop causing chaos and just think what she's doing. Plus Romeo, haven't seen him in awhile, will he know Friendship and is his father doing something to him. Is this futuristic Stefan going to get waisted or something. That's all sorry I haven't review after reading the chapter since 4 or 5 months ago |
Reviewed By: 786518 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 19:36 CST
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It's been quite some time since the last update. Any chance of seeing another chapter up? |
Reviewed By: Lewis Wick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm working on an update right now, and have been for a while. I'm almost done, but the big problem will be "Does anyone have the attention span to read it?" I'm already on page 36 of this chapter, and thats with the maximum allowed page space!! It will make up for the big gap, trust me.
- Lewis Wick... Oh look, I rated myself... |
Reviewed By: 786518 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...Any chance of seeing an update within the not-to-distant future? |
Reviewed By: 786518 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 21:21 CST
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Nifty. I'm looking forward to it! |
Reviewed By: Roketsdg34 On: August 03, 2002 13:24 CDT
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Is Lily going to go bananas again or is she going to see that she's not a puppet or whatever. Did Romi already learn the true meaning of friendship or is does he need to learn it. What about his father? Is he going to keep on being some annoying person. How about the digidestines train everyday or blow up things by the Dominion now and then. |
Reviewed By: Lewis Wick On: July 23, 2002 11:35 CDT
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I'm not sure on the site, but I can ask... As for Yuuji's family, I'll give a hint... See Chapter 16, when it comes out, that is... (I tend to plan way ahead)
Yay, I got a review!!
- Lewis Wick |
Reviewed By: Roketsdg34 On: July 21, 2002 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man. Love your stories. Glad you make it funny every now and then. So I was wonder what has Iori been doing all this time. Will Yuugi's dad(I know he's trying to protect him, but sometimes parents don't understand things and sometimes they do) ever see the truth that some digimon aren't bad. Did the dominion ever kill Yuugi's mother. Do you think you over did Sora with the whole being robotic. I only read part of chapter 11. So keep writing them. Oh and do you know ExcelUltimamon's website. |
Reviewed By: Lewis Wick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 09:54 CDT
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You asked of Excel Ultimamon's site, so I found info!!
http://fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=49887
There you go!!
As for Lily, what puppet? It's all her, and there's a surprise coming at the end of Ch 13... Now, as for the others, let me explain that a group divided lacks the firepower to blow things up, but (See Ch 14) will change that!!
- Lewis Wick |
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