| "Once Upon a Night..." Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: neko_cat_kirara [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 18:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAY!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! ;p wow the yoko actually being shippo thing was really origional i would have neva thought o that! its grrrrrr8!! lol ;p ja!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 12:18 EST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please! :P
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 04:41 EST
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I'm so happy to get to read another chapter! You completely took me by surprise by making Youko - Shippou!! Love it! The idea that Shippou will soon become a spirit fox in the past and will go off and change his name to Youko -- excellent! Can't wait to see how he becomes a spirit fox! And those cryptic hints that something will happen soon and she won't be going back -- you've got me on the edge of my seat! I really like the idea that Shippou/Youko intentionally chose an unborn child that would look like Shippou -- nice touch! Hiei's so great when he's acting obnoxious. And I loved him telling Youko to "quit smothering her." I'm anxious to find out out what's going to happen that Youko can't tell her about because he doesn't want to ruin her chance at happiness. And since it was "unfortunate" that Hiei heard that thought, I guess he's going to bug Youko about it -- will he find out? Or does it concern him, too? Nice touch having Sango, Miroku, and inuyasha being the ones to build the shrine Kagome lives at. All-in-all, just a fine chapter! You've got me wanting more!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune12 On: December 29, 2006 11:30 EST
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OMG...I love this story...I really hope you update it soon
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue it good and happy holidays
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 20:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god....pleaseeeeeeee update soon...pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.... with hiei on top.......(hiei is mine back off)(takes Hiei from you) (looks around then hands him Back to you..) (I only share with you if you update soon)pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...........................
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 18:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This last chapter is just wonderful I can't believe you made Kags mom an air head *Giggles* And *Yonk!* Hie's mine for an hour I'll give him back after I feed him Sweet Snow *S* Please update soon when you get the chance. Happy Holidays.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 09:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy do like this story,and now i'm confused about Yoko(I like spelling it Youko,but that's me) calling Kag's Okaa-san which I know means mother.I am confused about it,but I can't wait to see the explanation for that one.Oh and plus I'v seen stories where kags is just transferd to Yusuke's school,or they come to her,but very original to have here kicked out of her school,and put in the YuYu gang's school.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 06:52 EST
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Thank you, thank you for writing another chapter so quickly! Yay! I am so impressed by your attention to detail -- loved the tidbit about her old principal having a crush on her Mom -- so cute! And it was great the way you set it up that she has past relationships with yusuke, Keiko, and Kuwabara. (Funny about Hojo STILL liking her!) I like the way she noticed Yusuke's changed aura, and Kuwabara noticed hers had changed, too. Your detail of her schedule was just right -- not too much to be boring, but just enough to nail her strengths and weaknesses by who she had class with. Nice, surprise cliffhanger, too. (I'm guilty of those myself, so I can't complain about them.) :) and you even managed to throw us a bone with a glimpse of Hiei's jealousy. Super job! I really can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 03:07 EST
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sounds interesting...I hope you can update soon
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon........please....With Hiei on top....(hiei is mine back off) (looks around then hands him to you..) (I only share with you if you update soon) pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......................
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 11:07 EST
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Oh yeah! Awesome beginning! How ironic that they first noticed each other when she was sent for ice cream. Love that! And you've already taken care of the Inuyasha factor -- at least as a love interst. Gotta see how he is as a protective less mature older brother, right? I really hope you write more soon! Lots of chapters over the holidays? Yes? Please?
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 03:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you so need to update soon please I can't wait to see what will happen next.!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 14:08 EST
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I like how the first chapter turned out,and I want to know what happens next,so please update!
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 13:06 EST
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wicked start, i cant wait to read more. much love always, hope xxx
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