| "Blood Of Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: redsnake15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a great fic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ninetailed Angel Projects [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Switching point of views from sentance to sentace; riddled with grammar and spelling errors. But fix that, tweak the flow and you'll have a good story. Also, you might want to describe your OC's a little better; we don't have much to go on for, say, Yasashiko. Ho~ra ne? XP
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Title: most awesome story
Reviewed By: band player [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was awesome,best,greatest,story ever.it's awesome.
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Reviewed By: Sakura123 On: January 02, 2007 02:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A Kiba and Sakura story how interesting. Now these stories are possibly more scarce than Sakura and Gaara fic's. Good story so far I like the setting, just watch your grammar and spelling errors. Keep writing though it's very entertaining.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 01:07 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPdate! This is an amazing Fic! I want to read MORE! Please Update! Oh! And By the way HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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