| "The Forgotten Uchiha" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: sugar0o [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe update! here and on FF!
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Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a good crossover better than most. You made the characters perfect. In some crossovers some people make some weird couples im happy you didn't. Please update soon!!!! And keep writing youre good at it.
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Reviewed By: SasuXHina4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHH!!!!! Dont take a year to update plz!!!! I swear Im about to fall off my seat!!! AHHHH!!! Ouff....I fell.... Any way when ya get the chance could you look up a story called Silver Locket Fadding Memorys?
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: lil-lostii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 03:28 CDT
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kool nxt chap plz? :D
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 05:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, they have arrived at Sesshoumaru's village. Now what? ^_^
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 07:02 CDT
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SQUUUUEEE I LOVE IT!!! hmmmm the pairing...... the pairing.....feel the same as VB about the whole incest thing, way to overused, and personally to me i think incest is totally wrong, major inbreeding! and she's to old for Naji, Naruto, Kiba, or any of the other genin, or whatever they are right now....hmmmmm, Kakashi mabye....sesshomaru?(then again that slightly defeats the purpose of the crossingover right?)it seems like the only good pairing to me would be either Kakashi and Kagome, or possibly Kagome and mabye a member of the akatsuki? Then again there is Kabuto...mmmmm NO not Kabuto, it just seems wrong! GRRRRR I think the only pairing that I could like is with Kakashi since all of the others are just kinda blah, I mean if she were a bit younger, i'd say neji or naruto but unfortunat;ly, to be Itachi's twin she must be 20....hmmmmSo yeah I guess I want a Kakashi/Kagome pairing, just because all the others don't fit and everyone loves that sexy beast we call Kakashi! >.< But anyways, I really wanna know what'll happen next! Please hurry!!! I can't wait! GOD bless you!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 21:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
It rocked! Keep it up and update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Destiny Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh... Tense!!! I can't wait to find out what will happen next!!!!! Please Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: AkiraInugami On: June 01, 2007 20:28 CDT
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Please update this very interesting story. I want to know what woll happen next. Please update!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: seimei On: May 31, 2007 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
there are many stories with kagome as the sister of sasuke and itachi but in this one it was a lot more creative and interested me.i really think you put kagome with either one of her brothers(itachi)if not then negi would work too. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon.. and I would love to see her with neji, or Kakashi. but in this story if she were with sessy it would be weird
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Reviewed By: ~Youkai Kami~ On: May 27, 2007 18:22 CDT
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I love this story so far. but please, please, please don't pair kagome with neji or kakashi. go for the incest! Sayonara!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 17:04 CDT
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Great work! I really loved it. Keep it up and update asap please.
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice update. I say Kakashi
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Reviewed By: VB On: May 24, 2007 01:51 CDT
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No incest please. I swear I'm beginning to think that no one can write Kagome as an Uchiha without writing an incest fic. If you decide not to you shall be the first because all the ones I've read have eventually become one which makes it over used and over rated. Looking forward to the next chapter though.
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Reviewed By: dejaz On: May 24, 2007 00:24 CDT
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cool!!! up date soon! will she hook u[p with someone and lemons?
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Reviewed By: Sakashima Mangekyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You should like...totally make this an Itachi/Kagome fic ~*Eyes dart back and forth and she points evilly down at Madmiko's comment*~
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 17:48 CDT
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Interesting chapter. I liked the way Shippou and Hiten got away from the nins following them. And ys gotta love it when Jakotsu feels up Inuyasha -- LOL!! I have to beg, please no incest. Too sick for words. Neji, Sess, or Kakashi all sound fine, though. Love it that she got away from Orochimaru so easily. Looking forward to the confrontation with her brothers.
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'de say that Kagome should end up with someone with pain and sadness in their hearts. Kagome is the type of person who can heal the hearts of others easily even when her own is being torn apart. she needs someone who is strongenough to protect her heart yet willing to let her heal theirs.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP DATE UP DATE UP DATE UP DATE UP DATE!!!!! PLEASE!! I LOVE THIS STORY!
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 23:06 CDT
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OMG!!!! That was so toatally awsome!!!!!! I adored it!!! I love this unique story line, you are a genious. I wil be forever anticipateing the next amazing portion of this tale that should atain the title of Art I beg you to upload the next chappie that will hold my attention utterly and completely in it's grasp! Please hasen your update! Please!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 00:46 CDT
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Oh so he had to hear sesshou say it huh?
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Reviewed By: Tsukinoshi On: March 24, 2007 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kagome/Neji Hinata/Sesshoumaru?
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story was really good at the beginning, but you starting to add in too much characters, getting the story off-topic and the idea is getting scattered all over...
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, there already is alot of chemistry forming between Kagome and Kakashi and they have similiar temperments and would be excellent as a couple. The impression I have got is Kagome and Kakashi are attracted to each other. I could really see the two of them together, more than anything else. Maybe pair Sesshomaru with Hinata or maybe even Tsunade.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 16:14 CDT
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Great work and update asap.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 00:37 CDT
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Just started reading this one -- interesting! Gonna pair Kag up with someone? I may have missed it, but how old is she supposed to be in this? I like her meeting up with the Inu crew. I'll look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: wehtflkjwrf On: March 16, 2007 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, happy birthday. I bet the ninja was Naraku
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 14:30 CST
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please update soon...cant wait..... ........ ............ ........ ............ ..... ....... . . . . . . . . . . . Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......... >..........>>>>.>>....>>.>>>..........& gt;>..>.>pretty please with the hotty ninjas on top..lol..
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Reviewed By: KJIHOKGUY On: March 07, 2007 08:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter.
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