Reviewed By: Snow_Bunnie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm... Good start. I'd like to see where this goes. Only suggestion would be to not put breaks between every sentance. Only between paragraphs. (Unless my computer is just being wierd...) But yeah, get another chapter up.
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