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Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fanfic was great. It flows well and is easy to follow, and I really appreciated the good grammar and writing. Very well done! I can't want to read more. |
Reviewed By: Claudia On: November 18, 2002 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
omigod, I love this story! Chapter 5 is sooooo cute! Seriously, READ THIS!!! |
Reviewed By: my name is ......connecting love,a yaoi person ,i will sign in oneday.... On: November 08, 2002 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it,but please no hard feelings about the nine on creativity but hey you are the most intersting writer ever and i love your site too!!!!! (^_^)or this face (@_@)at mcdolad's,we love to see you DIE!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: October 08, 2002 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
muaa I realy liked this. Vash and Knives are such super hunksters. *Drool* yes welll anywho write more soon and let me know when you do. I love your work.
shadypony527@netscape.net
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Reviewed By: Me On: August 25, 2002 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Vashu/Knives fic i have EVER read. and yes i have read MANY!! |
Reviewed By: Robofetus0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never, in my (admittedly short) life, have I ever found such a compelling twincest fic. I am amazed by the convincing play between Knives and Vash, and how they grapple with their seemingly-irreconcilable differences. Normally I blanch at the mention of 'emotional bonding' during sex, but they way you incorporated this idea into your writing made it seem believable, necessary, and unforced, and in no way incongruous to the natures of the characters Vash and Knives. I look forward to reading more of this. |
Reviewed By: Cathowl On: September 26, 2002 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me like a lot! Pretty Vash and Knives! More please, I enjoy! |
Reviewed By: Kushinata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, the story was great and I love the way you explained everything, it makes so much sense! As for the spelling.............I wasn't paying attention, its gotten to the point that it just plays out in my head and I forget about the words so I would only notice big errors that would stop the show. Please email me when you write more, I can't bookmark every story that I like and I doubt I will be able to find this again. Thankyou
the email is Cybotepyon@aol.com |
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