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Reviewed By: Chaos-chan On: April 02, 2003 18:22 CST
Comment/Review:
what, it's over? damn... well hten, you better make that MST!!! I want it!!! |
Reviewed By: Bennu On: March 14, 2003 19:08 CST
Comment/Review:
^____________^ I'm not so much of a K/V supporter (I just love Legato too much I have to boggart the Knives-love for him, ne?) but this kicks so much ass. I lurve this. Lurve lurve lurve it to pieces. Finish it soon lest I wither and die from lack of decent yaoi.
Oh, and I vote for Meryl's eyeballs imploding! |
Reviewed By: Kit On: February 20, 2003 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A quarter of the overall funness of the fic came from your random author comments. Dance Dance Revolution is very fun. ^.^ Vash and Knives are very well written and I got so into it I didn't notice I had finished the whole thing (all 6 chapters) until I went to click "next" and found that there was no "next". Gah! More, please! please? *teary-eyes* Q-4-u...Are you going to include the Plants in any way (other than they getting happy when Vash-n-Knives get happy)? It could be cool. *nods* |
Reviewed By: Chaos-chan On: January 31, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you fic... 'nuf said ^^ [and I had noticed no spellig errors when readin this fic... apparently I'm oblivious to grammar (which I rarely am)]
Cheers!
~~Dynast's Girl~~ lover of yaoi and everything in hand with it~~ |
Reviewed By: Claudia On: January 29, 2003 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww! You *have* to continue this! Please don't leave us twisting like this! You made us wait over two months for this part (gr!) and then you leave on such a cliffhanger! Gr! :( More! |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 16:38 CST
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AH! An update! What joy! Chapter six was fun. I practically gasped when I got the part where Meryl finds about about them. Hehe. I'm looking forward to the next update. :D |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: January 27, 2003 08:58 CST
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oh my I wonder what the insurance girls will think of all this. hm. Continue please. I hate cliffhangers*err*
\\V//
^_^. Love and Peace
SHADY |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fanfic was great. It flows well and is easy to follow, and I really appreciated the good grammar and writing. Very well done! I can't want to read more. |
Reviewed By: Claudia On: November 18, 2002 20:23 CST
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omigod, I love this story! Chapter 5 is sooooo cute! Seriously, READ THIS!!! |
Reviewed By: my name is ......connecting love,a yaoi person ,i will sign in oneday.... On: November 08, 2002 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it,but please no hard feelings about the nine on creativity but hey you are the most intersting writer ever and i love your site too!!!!! (^_^)or this face (@_@)at mcdolad's,we love to see you DIE!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: October 08, 2002 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
muaa I realy liked this. Vash and Knives are such super hunksters. *Drool* yes welll anywho write more soon and let me know when you do. I love your work.
shadypony527@netscape.net
V//
_^. |
Reviewed By: Me On: August 25, 2002 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Vashu/Knives fic i have EVER read. and yes i have read MANY!! |
Reviewed By: Robofetus0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never, in my (admittedly short) life, have I ever found such a compelling twincest fic. I am amazed by the convincing play between Knives and Vash, and how they grapple with their seemingly-irreconcilable differences. Normally I blanch at the mention of 'emotional bonding' during sex, but they way you incorporated this idea into your writing made it seem believable, necessary, and unforced, and in no way incongruous to the natures of the characters Vash and Knives. I look forward to reading more of this. |
Reviewed By: Cathowl On: September 26, 2002 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me like a lot! Pretty Vash and Knives! More please, I enjoy! |
Reviewed By: Kushinata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, the story was great and I love the way you explained everything, it makes so much sense! As for the spelling.............I wasn't paying attention, its gotten to the point that it just plays out in my head and I forget about the words so I would only notice big errors that would stop the show. Please email me when you write more, I can't bookmark every story that I like and I doubt I will be able to find this again. Thankyou
the email is Cybotepyon@aol.com |
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