| "The Ningen, Youko, and Yami" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
i LIKE TO READ THAT DOUJINSHI PLEASE my email is
hellina101@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Wing On: December 02, 2002 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want updates |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 19:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
more!!!!!!!!!!! need more!!!!!!! bakura! bakura! muhahah! i own bakura and hiei! i bought them at a rumage sale! muhahahah! |
Reviewed By: Helteage On: August 21, 2002 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a really great job! Better than mine, although everything is better than mine. Keep it going and email me when you get the update.
Helteage@aol.com |
Reviewed By: Cayenne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Please please please please (you get the picture) write more! |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: June 02, 2003 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!! GREAT STORY!;) |
Reviewed By: Chibi Koorime On: July 13, 2002 04:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, it's me, the author of the fic! Well, someone asked me for the doujinshi url, so here it is: http://www.aestheticism.net/yyhdjs/general/g_index.html the home of english translated yyh doujinshi! And most of them have Hiei in it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Anyume Salem On: July 11, 2002 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read the first chapter, but the story is very promising. I'd consider getting a beta-reader, though, because a lot of your sentences are off-topic and premature...other than that, you have a wonderful imagination! Btw, I'd love to read that doujinshi...my email is ad_garnet@email.com |
Reviewed By: drack On: June 21, 2002 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry the color don't work right the frist time |
Reviewed By: drack On: June 21, 2002 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Font Color i LOVE your story and i hope you get the next chapter out soon!! there nothing like this story because i looked and this is the only one so you gets points for a new idea. and this there a Kurama card? hope i can get one!!! |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kawaii desu wa Kurama-kun! AH!!!!!!!!!!! (faints) Isn't he just dreamy! (gets wacked by her Yami) Stop acting like a fan girl! Act like Hiei for once! (points at Hiei who was playing rock scissor) -.-0 Forget I said that. (hugs Kurama) KAWAII! But too bad he's not mines. *Sniffs* CONTINUE! |
Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 On: June 15, 2002 08:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is fun to read.Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: CJ On: June 10, 2002 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. You need to write more. I think that this is the best fic I have ever read. |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it! Though I had a little problems with the YYH cast. I never get their names right! too many of them start with the same letters don't you agree? Well email me when the next chapter is up! Thanks! and Fanfiction.net sucks! it breaks down too many times! |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic proves to be very interesting. Too bad people here are sometimes to vague to review. I would love to read more of this. Please continue and I will come back for more. I can review more. |
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