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Reviewed By: Animelover6000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2011 02:44 EST
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Muhahah I love it. Notice it hasn't been updated for a while, hopefully it'll be updated soon? |
Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2009 05:14 EDT
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awww and you left this one sitting as well. damn it all, i want some finished stories~!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 02:50 EDT
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that is an awesome story... I can't wait for more... awesome job
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 23:03 EDT
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Ok now that you are writing again I'm rereading all of your fics and you need to update this one as well. After all it has MY favorite Saiyan in it. (beautiful long haired ball of sex) Sorry dazed off for a second. Anyway.... I'm really enjoying all of your stories and have been for a while. Thanks for writing -El-
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Reviewed By: Susan On: November 02, 2002 02:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a fantastic chapter. Veggie's back to his old self again, there were V/B moments, and for the icing on the cake, Radditz and Kakarott are back. Can't wait to see how Vegeta reacts to the return of K and R. He's gonna flip ^_^. Keep up the great work :D. |
Reviewed By: mousey7891 On: November 01, 2002 23:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! great chappy as usual. i loved it i like the bulma veggie moment. yeah! and i like that goku is back. and about Orlando Bloom he plays Legolas the elf in Lord of the rings. if you want to know more about him and see his hott pics go to theorlandobloomfiles.com k well keep up the awesome writing can't wait for more!
mousey
P.S. I love Orlando Bloom!!! |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 04, 2002 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Storyline with lots of twists in the plot. I love the tension in Vegeta towards Bulma. There's no OOC I'v seen you even kept Piccolo in his appropriate mood. lol. Rereading these statements I've proven to myself that this story is great and you must I mean MUST!!! finish soon.
Please... I mean you left at such a tension filled part.
Oh Well God Bless and please put the next chapter up. *sigh* May I add Very Very SOON!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mousey7891 On: September 06, 2002 16:23 EDT
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hey great 3 chappies. i don't know if i review all the time because i used to have the slow connection now i have dsl so i actually review now. welps i love your story it's great. i gtg i need to check on something k well keep up the totatly awesome writing.
Lauren
P.S. I Love Orlando Bloom |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 06, 2002 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol!! The Yamcha scenes were so funny. Also I must be Kakarotting lately because I totally forgot about the senzu beans and their healing powers. Needless to say I'm so happy Vegeta is back to his old self again ^_^. Btw, you never touched on who attacked Krillin. I don't know but the asshole Ribery comes to mind. Hope you update soon and let us know what happened with K. Oh yeah, this chapter was also very good. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 06, 2002 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good one. V/B are back together again under really crappy circumstances. I'm glad they're just lying together in the same bed. Sex would've seemed out of place when you're mourning the death of a loved one. But what's this...K is about to be attacked? Guess I'll have to go to #18 (no, not his wife...sorry I couldn't resist ^_^) to find out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 06, 2002 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, 3 chapters all at once! What did you do...take a pep pill? Don't get me wrong, I love it and to show my appreciation for your hard work I will review each one separately (I'm such a f*cking sweetheart ^_^). Anyway, you turned out another good chap. I hope that Vegeta will be able to speak again. Somehow giving people the finger instead of cussing them out won't be as amusing. Maybe Bulma can work her magic on him, you know pissing him off so badly that he'll find himself yelling 4 letter words at her. I feel bad for ChiChi, being pregnant and now K is dead. Rad on the other had to be eliminated. I mean the dude was out of control. So I guess it's on to #17. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're feeling very humorous today aren't you? My brother thinks I'm nuts because I was laughing out loud at most of chap. 18.
'Now—to say something profound! “Well, woman? I’m hungry!”'
That line took the cake but Yamcha was by far the funniest. I loved the whole blank look thing. It's just so....Yamcha. Bulma's got our little Veggie on the run huh? Perfect.
WOW! To me! *smirks at Vegeta*
JB: Ha! I got a story dedicated to me! Bet that's never happened to you!
Vegeta: *rolls eyes* All her stories are about me so I think that's a little better than a simple dedication.
JB: *frowns* Oh shut up you! I just can't wait until I find a good replacement! Then you'll be sorry for being mean to me.
Vegeta: Probably not.
JB: *sticks out her tongue*
Anyway I have another reviewer lined up but they probably won't be here until after the next story. So see ya...BOYFRIEND!
Vegeta: *shakes head* Here we go again.
That's soooooo great. Aren't they wonderful? *sigh*-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 01, 2002 08:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I missed this update. It never came up on the main page :(. Anyway, my heart is breaking...Kakarrot and Radditz, wiped out in one chapter, and Veggie is fighting for his life! In a sadistic mood I see -_-. Well at least there's the dragonballs. CC's gonna go ballistic when she finds out what happened to her new love, not to mention Bulma's reaction. I need a pill. Anyway, sorry about your ex, but hey if it's not working out it's better to end it. I'm also sorry about your car and computer problems. As they say, "when it rains, it pours". At least your mom's doing better ^_^. So now that I'm thoroughly depressed I'm gonna go and drown myself in a cup of coffee and check to see if I missed any updates of your other stories. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 20:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (insert evil cackle here)
JB: My God NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Not Kakarot and Radditz in the same chapter!!!! It's not fair!!!!!!
Vegeta: *inserts another quarter into the 'Evil Cackle' machine and smirks*
JB: Stop that! *takes Vegeta's bag of coins* This is no laughing matter!
Vegeta: Kakarot's dead! Of course it is.
JB: Vegeta you're such a jerk! What are you doing here anyways? I thought you were sick of talking to me.
Vegeta: I am but you seriously don't think I would miss a Kahlan update, do you? She's the only person I know who hates Kakarot as much as I do. Well...almost.
JB: Well get lost. My first reviewer will be here any- *knock at the door* Come in!
*potential reviewer enters and Vegeta's jaw drops while JB smirks*
Vegeta: *outraged* You're going to replace me with him!
JB: *smirks* Hopefully. Now move! You're in his seat. Come Kakarot, seat. Your just in time.
Goku: *smiles and takes the seat Vegeta just grugdedly vacated.*
Vegeta: *grunts and walks away*
JB: *pats Goku's leg* So Kakarot. What did you think of this chapter?
Goku: Well...I didn't really like it because well...I died.
JB: I agree! Though it was well written and held my attention all the way through I'm completely broken and pained at both the lost of Kakarot and Radditz.
Goku: But Radditz is evil! Why are you sad over him?
JB: How can you say that?! You're just as horrible as Vegeta! Look I don't think this is going to work out Kakarot!
Goku: Uh, my name is Goku.
JB: Whatever! Just get out!
*Goku shrugs and leaves. JB grunts and turns to Kahlan* Maybe this update wasn't all that bad. Well my search for a co-reviewer continues. My deepest sympathies on the illness of your computer and the passing of your car. Great (but sad) update.-J
Wait! You have a new story! All right!-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! OMG! OMG! Boyfriend! Boyfriend! Boyfriend! That's sooooooooo great! An-
Vegeta: JB
JB: What?!
Vegeta: You have to talk about the chapter before you can move on to personal matters.
JB: Oh, well the chapter was GREAT! And look there's Radditz! With authors like Cha you just go to love him. Oh and the whole part about the Kamehameha had me rolling. I completely agree! Was that enough Veggie?
Vegeta: You don't have anything else to say.
JB: Look Vegeta you're really bumming me out. If you keep being such a drag I might just have to get another co-reviewer.
Vegeta: Do that then.
JB: *shocked* What?!
Vegeta: I'm tired of talking to you as it is. I'd just like to see you replace me.
JB: *sniffles then raises her chin* Fine I will then! *sniffs* Hear that Z gang? I'm holding auditions for a new co-reviewer because Vegeta really SUCKS! *stick out her tongue and Vegeta shows her his back*
Anyway *sniffs* I'm so happy that one of us has finally gotten a guy but the important question is does he like Vegeta? *crosses arms* Because I don't!
Vegeta: *grunts and walks away*
*once he's gone JB breaks down into sobs* OMG! What if he thinks I'm serious and never reviews with me again?! Kalhan what am I going to do?! *continues to wail as she rans away*-JB |
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