| "Tenmei: Hinomoto Botsu" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:26 CST
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Okay Cobramaru has no idea. So now what? Poor Fenn. Is Genkiamru and his Energy Squad goung to help? I must know.
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: February 05, 2007 07:52 CST
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So it wasn't Cobramaru. Interesting. No, you aren't wasting your time. But a thought occurs. Cobramaru Black's power of appearence copying isn't completely new. Another villain managed to sneak a Princess Rele duplicate aboard the Gundamusai, remember? And he captured the Feather Dragon before as well. Could Fenn's kidnapper be...DEATHSCYTHE?!
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Title: Yaaaayy
Reviewed By: Whitetail [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 20:25 CST
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Awsome so far ^^
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: January 29, 2007 07:50 CST
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So the Gundam Force is heading for Ark. Does this mean that Genkimaru and Zapper's Gang are appearing in the next chapter? Cool! And I can definately tell that the weirdos in the first paragraph were responsible for the Fenn-napping. A Musha Gundam, Raidon, and ex-Knight Gundam Daja...Daja wants Lacroa, but what does Raidon want? Rulership of Ark? For some reason, these two guys remind me of De Jarl and Hakaimaru, what with their partnership and all.
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC~not logged in~ On: January 28, 2007 20:42 CST
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YAY!!! Awesome, I can't wait for the next one! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 19:17 CST
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So another adventure begins. I wonder what will happen to Fenn. Contiue please.
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Title: Whitetail
Reviewed By: Whitetail [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 08:35 CST
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I've noticed that people spell it like "Lacroix", is that right? D: I thought it was spelled "Lacroa" or something. XD
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Title: =ooo
Reviewed By: Whitetail [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 11:58 CST
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OH SNAP! This just keeps getting better and better! Keep it up! ^^ And I'm starting to notice that you are getting more in depth with your writing style, keep that up as well!
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 21:34 CST
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Wait what!? they think bakunetsuamru did it. He wouldn't do that. I wonder how he'll get out of this snes everyone else seems prety convince. Some one might have digusied themselves as Baku. Continue please.
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Title: Whitetail
Reviewed By: Whitetail [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fricken awsome so far! X3 I would be cool if you lengthened scenes a bit more and perhaps even add more UMPH (adjectives/descriptions) but otherwise, I enjoyed it a lot. Keep it up! ^^
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Title: Wow, this is different...
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat (I can finally review!) On: January 07, 2007 19:11 CST
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A big change from your old random-fics and whatnot. I really like it. It's a little distressing though, the way Zero looks like he doesn't want to visit with his old friens. But maybe that's just me. This looks like a great story so far. Let's see where it goes from here.
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: January 07, 2007 16:35 CST
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This is getting weird. 'Unregistered' ninja? What does that mean? And the student of a sensei that doesn't take stuents? bizare! And why would Cobramaru(you can just shorten it to Kobura if you want, as Cobra sounds awkward to you) still take orders from Kibaomaru? he swore loyalty to GEnkimaru now, didn't he?
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Reviewed By: Melady On: January 03, 2007 12:26 CST
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Mel: Okay, this will get through this time! This story seems to be going in an interesting direction. I wonder what happened back in Lacroa though. And who could steal a sacred beast? >.> Oh, and be sure to work Daja and Raidon hard. They've been in existance for a while, but haven't had to work... until now. Please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: FeatherDragon On: January 02, 2007 23:47 CST
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Interesting. So far. Continue please.
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: January 02, 2007 18:18 CST
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This is pretty good. Keep at it! Also, Please review my fic, SD Gundam Force Adventure, at fanfiction.net, it's under Anime/Manga, under Misc.
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