| "Fetish? What's A Fetish?" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChibiGirlXD [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2011 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is hilarious!!! XD XD XD Wouldn't normally go for perverted ones like this but you just make it work.. -.- XD Are you on fanfiction.net? Can you please tell me where you update first..? XD XP (gonna catch up tonight and am really impatient... XP) Yes, the story is getting weird and all but.. It.. Makes.. Sense.. XD XD (no, I'm not on crack.. Just high on anime and stuff.. XD Doing a great job there, hope you're still updating!! >.<
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Reviewed By: maniacallaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2010 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is hilarious... XD I love how you have written Naruto's adventure and investigation. You really are covering all aspects of the topic. I laughed so hard... this is one of the few fanfics to make me laugh so hard that I almost cried. As well as that, you have a highly original idea, and you have implemented it well. Continue on with the story.
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Reviewed By: ThirdWheel On: October 26, 2010 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Highly entertaining. You managed to include the vast majority of ideas about sex while at the same time, showing how incorrect and misleading they are. The characters and their reactions were brilliant. It's a highly original idea, and you have pulled it off exceptionally well. I really hope that you continue this.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: July 13, 2010 23:13 EDT
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OMG!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!! GIVE ME MORE!!!! PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE GOING TO UPDATE!!! I READ THIS AND IT IS SOOOOOO FREAKIN FUNNY!!!!! I'M ALREADY TELLING MY OTHER FRIENDS ABOUT THIS STORY AND THEY NEED TO READ IT TOO! CAN'T WAIT TIL THE NEXT UPDATE!!! THOSE POOR INNOCENT BABIES! LMBO
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Whoever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2010 22:56 EDT
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I just remembered back in "Mating Season" that you never told us who got him...but you told us in this fic....somewhere back when Naruto was having a dream about it. Nice way to connect both stories
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Title: OMG I SHOULD HAVE LISTENED!
Reviewed By: member but not loggged in FlamingFoxFire On: March 19, 2010 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o_o OMG I SHOULD HAVE LISTENED TO YOU.....EWW....WHO IN THERE RIGHT MINDS WOULD TRY THAT SPACEDOCING THING!? EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! GREAT STORY.....REALLY FUNNY! KEEP RIGHTING!
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 08:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no words anymore, mostly because of lack of oxygen from laughing way harder than any person ever should. I choked so many times that I almost died trying to regain my breath. Especially Shikamaru's, once again, bad timing. This story deserves it's own show. And you deserve a medal.
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Title: Why....
Reviewed By: Whoever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2010 23:04 EDT
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Why....why didn't i listen to you?....i didn't see any pictures of the "docking space" thing....but reading it made me throw-up.....i will heed your warnings more carefully next time
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Reviewed By: 5567 no okami On: March 18, 2010 21:38 EDT
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Great, 3 girls, 1 naruto, and one jealous sasuke!
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Reviewed By: Whoever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 07:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i just re-read this chapter...the fourth thing that the shadow clone naruto is supposed to do, did you leave that out on purpose?...probably.. also though im being stupid again why was he tied up?
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Reviewed By: saiyan prince 1 On: March 03, 2010 03:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked how the chapter went... though i got to wonder what will happen next
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2010 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The day that you were born into this world we were given the gift of comedy in it's purest form. I still can't believe that something this awesome was thought up by a human being. Your genius knows no bounds and I can't wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: Whoever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2010 22:21 EST
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Nice man animals, sex and ropes all in one. A God. Nice hope the next one is as interesting
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Reviewed By: 5567 No Okami On: March 02, 2010 21:42 EST
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Hell yeah. Another success. Cant wait for the super love potion of mushroomness. The more I read the more I realize how alike this is with To Love Ru and Girls Bravo, just, you know, better and more ninja. Gotta say though, so far my pick for narutos gf would have to be ino at this point
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Reviewed By: Whoever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 17:50 EST
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Me below...forgot to loging when putting those....*sigh*
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