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| "The other half of a double sided story." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: enter your title here...
Reviewed By: **********____me____********* On: January 08, 2007 05:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol its good, gross(at the beggining),but overall good hehe.Get on with the rest of the story hehe.
| Reviewed By: ^^Mi^^ On: January 03, 2007 04:04 CST
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OMG! This chap was so wicked! (cept for the part where he's wearing a TANK-TOP... yea, gnna bug ya bout that for forever!) Anyway, cute-ness of Dante-childhood... awwww... and the random russian was awesome! UPDATE (actually... dont yet, wait at least til i update mine... need to catch up to ya! ;P)
| Reviewed By: mark-from-spain On: January 02, 2007 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god, you morbid!!! and to think we were friends!!! *cough* still hope so *cough* lol , well, very good, my correcting button got pushed while reading this, so plz, re-read it, ok, thx, and come to Marbella, we can go out again, you live too far!!
| Reviewed By: ^^Mi^^ On: January 02, 2007 17:37 CST
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So awesome! *thumbs up* So prettily angsty and dark (in a sense... :P) ya know i gtta love it!!! Can't wait for the next update (but remember to update sag as well!!!) *cough* *UPDATE* *cough* ;)
| Reviewed By: Larg On: January 02, 2007 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bit depresing dont'cha think?? i mean, rape? god wat happened to you well you where in spain? lol, well hope ta cya soon, Love ya *chu*
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