| "A Simple Legacy (I)" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: SXBF On: January 19, 2007 20:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow - I really Love it! Please, Please, Please, Please continue! I must see more of it! PLEASE! I do notice a slight change in Sesshoumaru's Attitude, and I love the plot line. Awesome story, please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 06:28 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! What an awesome story! Very original. I love the plotline. I'm seeing a slight, but definite change begin in Sesshoumaru's attitude toward her. Keeping Shippou from barreling into her injuries without the conscious thought that "if she's injured she can't help me" seems to indicate a shift. If this is going to go Kag/Sess, it's off to a terrific, really nicely believable start. It's also off to a sad, angsty start in terms of Inu/Kag. He hates Kikyou and lusts for Kagome? It's hard to read her feelings for him, though. this is really good, and I'll be looking for more of it!
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 00:11 EST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter... Had to seperate those two didn't you. I'm really excited as the progressive challenge this will bring for the relationship of Inuyasha and Kagome. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: phalon23 (nsi) On: January 12, 2007 19:37 EST
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Okay finally a fic where the couple doesn't get into right off the bat... Both slightly distracted and I have to wonder what Sesshoumaru will do about the Miko afterwards. Keep up the good work!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 00:25 EST
Comment/Review:
I can't wait 4 the next ch!!! I love this!! YAY! lol. Update real soon please!
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 07:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is coming along quite nicely. Please update asap.
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Reviewed By: TNT-gal On: January 04, 2007 05:56 EST
Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Please update soon!
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