Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: Toasties On: January 14, 2007 05:47 CST
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good, but...why is it written all in bold italics? I also noticed a few bits where there were letters missing...I expect better from you. Could you please explain why? I want to read the unblemished fics that are no doubt characteristic to you, not some typo'd mess. Still, looking past the typos, this was pretty good material. It's quite dark and mysterious, and I don't know what's going on. Is it me, or is Tails a little...well...cheeeky? He was talking about Cream's ass, after all...At any rate, keep it up!
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