| "Keitaro the Artist" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Open commission
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Comment/Review:
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: juanjoseso [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 15:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great start good writting and and good spelling good going
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Reviewed By: x2501 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 13:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sweet, simply Sweet. but i wish you would have made it longer, you know, drag the story a bit more. but it's really good all the same
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Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: March 29, 2007 10:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Howdy! Pretty good stuff there. I can tell from your notes that you want to tie this fic off before it gets away from you and becomes a twenty part monster. I can understand that completely. But, I personally think it needs another chapter or two to drag out the reactions of the other residents, Motoko and Naru in particular. Motoko discovering the nude portrait of Kitsune would be hilarious to say the least. I am sure a tranquliser gun would have to become involved at some point in calming her down. Anyway, enough of my opinions. Suffice to say, this is a great little story. Good work! T
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 06:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
This version is indeed better than the first version. It makes sense, it flows naturally, and the plot is believeable. Excellent job.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 04:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice ending, I'm glad you didn't drag it out for no good reason. Thanks for writing.
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Reviewed By: x2501 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 02:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. Eagerly awaiting Update... so get to it, k :)
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Reviewed By: Xlthanga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 15:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the changes made to the original story that resulted in new events and new version of Keitaro. Could be slightly longer but thats my preference, can't wait till you update more.
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Title: This is so...beautifull
Reviewed By: Capito Celcior [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 06:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A far better Keitaro. And much better accepted by the girls. Keep it up. I know, the 10, 10, 10... grading seems unoriginal, but belive me I do NOT give out the perfect grades that easily. I usualy always find a fault.
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Reviewed By: m64 On: January 17, 2007 13:13 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmm... I see you changed it; why, just yesterday it was a one-shot story, now I see it's become something more. For a minute I thought I had skimmed this part on accident. It's a great beginning for what I'm sure will be a great story; I hope to read more soon.
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Title: Great rewrite
Reviewed By: Godslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 12:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I liked it before but with some fleshing out it feels like the beginning of a great story to me. I look forward to reading more as you write it.
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Title: Very Interesting
Reviewed By: Godslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story a lot, it's although I think it would have been better had you fleshed it out some more instead of having it be so short. But I'll take what I can get. I can't speak for anyone else but if you do more chapters I'd read and enjoy them.
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