| "Cerulean Skies" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 20:10 CST
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Well that makes sense.. I really want to see what Ayame will think about this... I really liked the part when Sesshy thought about little Kougas running around.. so Kawaii!!! Sesshy a daddy wonder how that would turn out.
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapt ! Even though I dont like Ayame I guess we can live with it. Cant wait for more! XD
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 20:20 CST
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i loved this lemon. it was exactly the opposite of the previous one. it was sweet and slow and loving. update soon!
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Title: Awesome!!!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! HOT chapt! It was very naughty! Well anyway I cant wait for the next update! XD
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 14:43 CST
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AWSOME...that was just so unbelievably HOT it was just burning I LOVED THE CHAPTER... Whoa they must need a two day sleep after that!! awsome chapter!!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story! I love it! It is sooooooo good! The only part I was unsatisfied with was that Sesshomaru and Koga never really had it out about Ayame! It was like Seshomaru just accepted that Kiba in a way cheated on him. I understand he is supposed to have sex with his lupa but he did a lot more than just have sex with her once. I though Sesshomaru reaction would be more outraged.
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Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a long chapter and very interesting.
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Title: O.o o.O O.O
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: December 16, 2007 23:53 CST
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Snow, I just had to pop in and leave my mark. That was fucking fabulous! I mean, smokin' to the extreme. You see, ever since "Torn" I knew I was dealing with a powerhouse of a yaoi writer. So this isn't a surprise at all, but still, woman! When you bring it you aim with both barrels! Exceptional fiction, and honestly, I expect nothing less from you.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 21:45 CST
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Whoa... THAT WAS TOTALLY KINKY!!! I would have never thought of Sesshomoru as that kind of Guy... but the whole Sesshy being an uke was HOT! Loved the way it was written I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
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Title: Surprised
Reviewed By: jenerik_brand [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a switch up! I cannot believe how you made Sess the bottom! Usually I find bdsm a little boring because it's so predictable. This was not. I did not expect Kouga to be alpha. That was a genius move! And the way you got into Kouga's head was great. He wasn't sure he'd make Sess' fantasies come true, he wasn't into the jade dildo. I love where he was telling Sess- who was one brat of a beta!- no, I'm not doing it anymore. And how he wanted to make love to him. But he was into it, he sure was, he was just more REALISTICALLY portrayed than your run -of-the-mill bdsm top who is "too perfect," usually. I haven't reviewed for a while, but the poly-fan in me wants to say how nice it is to see a yaoi where the heterosexuality's not forgotten. It's not an either-or proposition. :) Great job, Snow! ::hugs:: Great, great update. I think the characterizations are spot on, and I love your Kouga. By the way, if i could rate you a 20 on originality I would. Pet Sesshomaru! Priceless!
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Title: chapter 18...was HOTT
Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 22:47 CST
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woow. that was extremely erotic and kinky and i loved it!!! your amazing. i can't wait till the next chapter so sesshy can fufill his promise!!
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Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats the longest lemon I've ever read , but very well written , it held my interest .
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Reviewed By: Sasha-sushi On: September 18, 2007 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to update, i like this story a lot and want more. pleasssseeee write more.
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Reviewed By: Oceanus On: July 05, 2007 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! UPDATE SOON!!! BUT PLEASSSEEE make it so that kouga feels remoser for what he has done sooner or later, believe me I understand the kind of jealousy Sesshoumaru would feel in this fic, and nothing hurts more than to find out the one you cared for enjoyed being with another AND wants to be with them again, please something must happen >< Sesshoumaru should find out more than jsut the fact that Kouga "did his duty," otherwise great story I really love it, just I had alot of trouble coping with this last chapter, heh when I read I SEE it all and seeing the "cheating" in a manner of speaking was so hard to bear>_
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Title: Oh my god!
Reviewed By: jenerik_brand [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 22:10 CDT
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i just read chapter six. It was so erotic. They way you describe, inch by inch, Sess' steps is so good. The thing that killed me was the interaction between Inu, Kag and Kouga. It was so sad. It would have ben so easy to make a bad guy out of one of them but they were all so sympathetic and I feel so sorry for all three of them. But that's not what was getting to me- it was the erotic stuff! The kiss in chapter five was to die for. Oh my god! You made it a sensory experience. The way Kouga loves Sess' *scent* is amazing. So sexy. And the sex in 6- is was amazing! And that ending was such a heartbreaker. I can't believe Kouga said that. Woa! I love this fic!
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