| "Centennial Hunger" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: September 01, 2007 20:47 EDT
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This is a bizarre fic. I'm not sure how to picture Sesshomaru as a dog or a human or a cross between. I like that he was somewhat lucid toward the end there and I'll assume the Kouga moment had some deeper meaning we'll be privy to in the future.
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Reviewed By: Kamakura Yumi On: September 01, 2007 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No matter who I am? I'm not so humble anymore, Snow. My only sin was in thinking that there would be justice for me. Yesterday I was thinking about writing to you but I was not sure you would reply, that you would have any interest in helping me or if it would have been fair for me to burden you with what I had to say... Of course I enjoyed your chapter and I'm sure I would have enjoyed it so much more if I wasn't in such a strange mood. A re-read is in order. I'm intrigued by the notion that centennial Sesshomaru is something of an ookami bogeyman. It was something of a shocker that Sesshomaru chose to reveal his love to Inuyasha so soon. I've watched the warmth and tenderness between them growing with bated breath. Indeed it was a wonderful ending to a sufficiently angsty chapter even if the seeming lightness with which Inuyasha talked of talking his own life was off-putting... I didn't realise it had been almost three months since your last post until I looked back to the date on the last chapter. Time permitting, I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lunarfang On: August 31, 2007 18:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness!!!!I waiting soooo long for this chapter to come out! My brothers thought I was crazy when I started running around the house squealing my head off haha. I love how the two bone heads are just figuring out that they need to have what they both want and damn the consequences. By the way, the waiting's not so bad when you know it's a REALLY good fanfic. It's like a good tv series, you always wait till next week just to find out what happens. P.S. I wanted to give you a virtual hug of happiness on my last review but I forgot so, VIRTUAL HUG!!!!
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Reviewed By: gen50notloggedin - On: August 31, 2007 03:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
serious? perhaps. but i enjoyed the light-hearted tone. and poor wimpy wolf - he's just about wrecked a very solemn moment. and you've highlighted the way people rationalize things so that what they do ostensibly makes sense.... did you change a lot? it seemed so, but that may have been just me and and my imgination....
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD!! i love your new chapter....i mean that was so cute how sess finally showed up again and told inu-chan his true feelings....i mean it just ROCKED ican't wait to you update again.....PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: kesha On: August 28, 2007 10:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to complete this fic cause I really like it and have been checking for a very long time so pleease can you update.
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 23:16 EDT
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Right then...I'm sufficiently full of things I shouldn't be and am writing an *intelligent and inspiring review. I still so love this, I had to go back and re-read it after I blew my pos puter and still I find this humorous in the ninth and such silly fun that I felt the need for comment. Please though, please please PLEASE don't pull a Mpreg on this or I'll have to kill you. Or take away your library card/swim-pass or something equally horrid. And I will, oh yes. Stories of silly, you make me laugh at the rain. I miss the ha ha * = I could find the keys on the pad and use them.
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Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny stuff , very funny .
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Title: AHHH!
Reviewed By: PromisedWings On: August 15, 2007 21:49 EDT
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I've been reading your story and checking back almost everyday to see if the next chapter is up. Your writing style is FANTASTIC and the storyline is brilliant, very creative with a fresh look at Sesshomaru. Haha, its also quite deliciously dirty, I love it whan Inuyasha takes Sessy by accident and then Sessy's revenge! The nipples!! I LOL-ed quite a bit. Please please please, update soon, I am going insane. Thank-you for the time spent in writing this, it is a pleasure to read.
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Reviewed By: AmberRose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'No puppies, please, no puppies.' (^_^) this is great. Fluff-tastic if you will. i forgot how much i enjoyed this fic. i'll be waiting for an update!
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Reviewed By: Lunarfang On: July 05, 2007 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is amazing!!I've never read anything like it before and apart from some errors I found it's spelling and grammar awesome! I can't WAIT for the next chapter I'm soooo excited. Oh, and it's totally HOT HOT HOT!!!! Keep going this rules!
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Reviewed By: KamakuraYumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 01:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. I loved the position. It was fantastic. Sesshomaru being in complete control, then turning back into a blubbering mess. It was hilarious. It was a great end to the chapter... I wondered why you should ask my opinion or include me in your feedback at all. Do you not remember the things you said to me sometime ago?
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Reviewed By: Cathappy;) On: June 10, 2007 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dam Dam Dam this is so good I love chapter 9. Thank you for the chapter. I do love it I am just not sure if I like all of the talk in between one part to the sex and the next. Like when they where going to fuck and inuyasha was talking to him self then sesshomaru was doing something to him and he continued to think. I think a little less thinking and a little more action would help keep your audence fixed on the story and not wander off. But it was still very good and I laght through most of it and whem I wasn't laphing I was transfixed by the story. Thanks so much. Keep going cant wate.
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Purinsu Arashi On: June 06, 2007 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I love your story, freaken awesome! My compliments to you beta as well! Is your beta the same as before? I love this chapter perfection in every way. I hope Every thing is going well for you. Im sorry it took so long for me to read/review... Lots of work lately, im getting sick of 10hour days =P Please take care! and as always your in my prayer/best-wishes! ^_^! =#=Storm=#=
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: HPTR Fangirl On: June 01, 2007 16:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely hot lemon scene between the brothers. Are there going to be more of it in the future. More importantly, would Sesshoumaru be uke in it, because there are hardly any stories I find with Sess as uke in InuSess stories. Your stories actually made me fanatic for uke Sess stories, especially in InuSess category. It even inspired me to write InuSess stories of my own. Comedy thrroughout the lemon also made laugh with glee. Can't wait to see how others are going to react to this, espcially, Kagome. Write more, I will be waiting for it. Got a serious question though (as an authoress to authoress) How come you can come brilliant story titles and chapter titles. I have hard time naming them. Please tell me Bye.
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