| "Cursed Island of the Devil Fruit Gods" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: shinobihunter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 01:44 CDT
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Well to be honest I'm having a lot of trouble coming up with a decent pair of Paramecia opponents for Nami and Robin to fight against. That's the problem I'm having, the reason I'm unable to finish chapter 21 and post it, I need to at least introduce all of their opponents. If anyone wants to email me or anything and drop suggestions, I'd be most appreciative. Other than that, I've got the story all worked out. So once this delay is over with there'll be nothing but smooth sailing until the story comes to its conclusion, which I figure will be around chapter 40 or 45. Unless I get some helpful suggestions, I have no idea how long it'll be before I am able to post another chapter.
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Reviewed By: BlackFootSanji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 19:55 CDT
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hmm it's been a long time, are you doing okay?
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Reviewed By: shinobihunter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 14:06 CDT
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I know, I know, I'm sorry! I've just been really busy and tired lately and I don't want to write while I'm too fatigued to do a good job. I'd rather wait longer and make it worth it than to crank out a piece of garbage on the fly and have everyone stop reading. But a few more reviews from different people would be nice to encourage me! But I do thank you, BlackFootSanji, for being so supportive!
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Reviewed By: BlackFootSanji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 10:09 CDT
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we;l I double posted but please come out with more soon
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Reviewed By: BlackFootSanji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 14:15 CDT
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:) please come out with the next chapter fast i'm bored and I want my one piece fanfic fix
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Reviewed By: shinobihunter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 01:40 CDT
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We're roughly at the half-way point right here, but things are only going to heat up even more. I've got some awesome new attacks formulated for our sexy ladies Nami and Robin, some unbelievable team-ups for the upcoming Shinigami battles, and a Paramecian opponent for Usopp that you're 'snot' going to believe!
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Reviewed By: BlackFootSanji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 21:23 CDT
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The characters are cool, colorful creative. The devil fruit powers are cool too i think this series would make a good arc or filler for one piece
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Title: Cybertoy00
Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 16:20 CDT
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Alright! You updated! And Luffy's back! In Gear 3rd! Awesome! But I wonder what this purpose is...?
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Reviewed By: shinobihunter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 13:29 CDT
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Yeah, I know, but I at least wanted to give a hint about what the next chapter was about. It'll be worth the wait, I promise. But what I'd really like is some reviews telling me what you all think about the original characters I've created. Chapter 21 will be up by this weekend, I promise.
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Reviewed By: BlackFootSanji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 13:04 CDT
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ha ha says comming sooon but not soon enough for me
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Reviewed By: BlackFootSanji [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 23:02 CDT
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oooh man the new chapter was amazing please please please come out with more faster ha ha i am a druggie for a good fanfic and this is my fix
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Reviewed By: shinobihunter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 01:55 CDT
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Thanks for all the praise, I welcome it, and frankly, crave more of it. Constructive criticism is nice too, just be polite and tasteful. And it looks like we're just about at the half-way point here...maybe 2/5 of the way, actually...I didn't know I had it in me to make it this long! Lots of fights up ahead with some VERY unique foes, heh heh. Mysteries are going to be revealed but in their place new ones will be popping up so there'll never be a dull moment. Chapter 20 will be up shortly and each chapter will take maybe a day or two thereafter. Remember, the more reviews I get, the more psyched I'll be to pump out the chapters sooner.
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Title: OH MY GOSH
Reviewed By: BlackFootSanji [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where to start, the story was amazing well written and captivating. PLEASE tell me that you will be comming out with more soon, 'cuz i'm gonna go nuts i check the page every day to see if you put up a new chapter
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Reviewed By: shinobihunter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 16:59 CDT
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But wasn't yours a visitor review before you became a member? Visitors or members can both review, I specifically allowed reviews, I didn't know if there were restrictions on who could and couldn't review...
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Title: Cybertoy00
Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 12:50 CDT
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It might help if you let none members review...
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