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Title: ch 49
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 11:05 EDT
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Poor sweetheart! Geez I had hoped that the guys in th black van were Preventer OPs or something! and the plot thickens!! Lets just hope they don't know who Duo is and they let him go.
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 11:21 EDT
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So, they are finally going to get Nurse and Keitaro? Oh, I hope so. But now Duo is going to be captured by the other bad guys!? Jeez, don't they ever get a break? If I was Duo, I'd retire after all of this! LOL! Take care of my babies. (Oh, wait, I did retire from the military to take care of my babies. LOL!) Keep writing. I am loosing internet, but I'll check once a week for an update at my mom-in-law's house.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:50 EDT
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Doh! that last review was for ch 48 ^_^ *hugs ya* update soon!
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Title: Ch 47
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:48 EDT
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... prize the boot off ...Duo's part, the boot ' Hey *squishes you*, there was a couple of times you said boot when the bad guys got him another pair of sneakers and Duo was wearing sneakers when they brought him to their hid out too. Geez.. this is serious, hopeful there are good guys in the black vehicle following that rotten Wainright & Co. Cause Duo and the Nanny could sure use some help.
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Title: ch 37
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:41 EDT
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...and fork on the plate of barely touched food. His hand sneaked across and snagged one of Trowa's sandwiches. "Much better." Trowa's eyes widened a little at the blatant 'snitching' of his lunch, then he gave a sigh and resigned himself to being on a 'restricted diet' until dinner time. *snickers* Quat's a little bit of a control freak? nahh more like he's spoiled and used to getting what he wants *snickers*
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Title: ch 32
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:38 EDT
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...floor and a scream tore from the young maid's throat as she stared into the open eyes of the dead man. Wait didn't he close them? Poor Duo... *clicks happily to next chapter*
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Title: ch. 30
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:36 EDT
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...black sweater they'd given him, Duo checked the knife where he'd stashed it in his boot.. Hey wasn't Duo wearing sneakers? ^_^ Thank you for sharing!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:34 EDT
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I've finished, I pack all my gear up as I don't want anyone knowing exactly what it was I was "' doing and then make it disappear into thin air. Something like Heero's spandex space." Poor Heero -_-, gosh he loves him so !! *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:33 EDT
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"I've finished, I pack all my gear up as I don't want anyone knowing exactly what it was I was doing and then make it disappear into thin air. Something like Heero's spandex space." XD I love those two together ^_^
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Title: *hugs you*
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've caught up!! so forgive for the long reviews ^_^' Ch8 - Well I just hope they don't touch Keitaro and just use the baby as a verbal threat, the terds! Ch10 - "I want one." "Eh?" "I want one." Three sets of confused eyes looked at the blonde businessman. "Want one what?" Duo asked, clearly flummoxed. "One of these." "Um... Stroller?" "No, I want a baby." "Ohhh... kayyy." Duo turned to face Trowa who was looking decidedly pale. "When did you say he had his last psych evaluation?" HAHA!!! *hugs you* I love Quat!!! So cute!! Haha, I bet he'd make Trowa carry it ^_^ can you imagine pregnant and going through the hormonal ups and downs!! XD Ch12- "Next time they might do a full body search, you know? All the body cavities." Duo raised an eyebrow and wiggled it. "They wouldn't dare!" Wufei growled as he paled. "Would they?" ... "Eh?" Duo had a confused look on his face, which soon turned to horror as he felt the wetness begin to seep through his clothes and the smell grew stronger, reminding him of his son's need for a diaper change. "Ah, shit." "Exactly," Wufei smirked. "Strike one for justice." haha That was priceless! XD I bet Hilde looks awesome Ch13- "You owe me ten bucks," Quatre hissed. "You'll get it," Trowa huffed. "I'd better." "Or what? You'll send out the debt collectors?" "Worse." Trowa paled. "You wouldn't?" "I would." "I swear, you'll have it when we get back to the hotel." "Good." Quatre turned his attention back to the ceremony. Trowa went silent again, brooding over his close shave with nearly losing his kitchen privileges. Haha XD are you serious!! Haha I thought it was going to be something else more devious from the sweet looking Quat! XD
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 19:39 EDT
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Keitaro gurgled and then coughed, blinking his eyes. A generous amount of powder sat on his belly, his eyes peeking out from a white film over his face. *smiles* Sooo cute *coos*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 22:36 EDT
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Hieeeee! I'm starting over and making time to read your wonderful story. Hope you've been well! *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: angeredcrow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 13:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic. I'm pregnant too and I could sympathize with Duo. Please, Please PLEASE continue writing this fic. I look forward to reading future chappies! Great Work!
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 14:44 EST
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Just because I didn't review doesn't mean I'm not still reading. Anyway... oh my gods, I hope they find them soon. Please tell me Duo put a message to where they are being held so that Heero can save them. Duo needs to get onto some medical care and soon. I don't know if you know this, but getting pregnant a year or less after having a C-section can actually cause the uterus, which is expanding with new baby, to rip. They usually put mothers on bedrest after the first few months because of this, and monitor them closely for this problem. Duo is going to need medical attention soon. And he's being very active right now, which can cause problems. Sorry, just wondered if you knew. I would love to see a new chapter though. I hope I have internet to continue reading this. Please, if I don't respond its because I'm using public computers and trying to read before time is up. Keep updating! I'm excited to know what happens.
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Title: aw....some!
Reviewed By: TyniDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 16:56 EST
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Can i just honestly tell you how much i love this fic. There are no words to describe.I hope you continue.
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