Reviewed By: Rak- Not logged in. On: May 15, 2007 23:34 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Awesome chapter, heh. Was just thinking about this story today. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the next chapter; you've done a great job with originality and plot and such.