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Reviewed By: shiakue On: January 27, 2007 08:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: pretty fucking good it needs a little more action it like fighting
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Reviewed By: darks_lil_angel910 On: January 27, 2007 05:42 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That had to be one of the best damn fics that are Nar/SakuI usually go with Naru/Hin but this just an incredible part one to a two-shot Hell you got me to review all though I'm not logged on right now I only do that when the author was really good. anyway hope the nextpart is as good.
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Reviewed By: bob2213 On: January 27, 2007 01:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great lemon scene....
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Reviewed By: bob2213 On: January 27, 2007 01:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great lemon scene....
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 15:14 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is incredbly good. You must keep going with this fic! I'm glad your doing something other than inuyasha fics. Please KEEP THIS GOING I BEG OF YOU!
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Title: OMFG Reviewed By: Im too lazy to log in: "Xand Dagger" is the name On: January 24, 2007 14:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OOMFG. this was by far one of the very best lemons that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I really hope thta you continue on with this fic. It is so well written and the dialog is just priceless. Although I do feel that you kind of waffle when something is explained. I hope that you can avoid that in the future chapters. Keep up the excellent work, and I cant wait for you to add the next installment. From the Dagg man
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 21:57 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, that was an awesome lemon. I can't wait to see the second part to this.
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