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| "The Gods' Opinion" Reviews/Comments [ 376 ] | | Pages (26): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 22:47 CDT
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Ok I am offically drooling. I effin love sushi. Good chappy, i'm excited for the next one.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chap! And love the recipes, lol. :P Update when ya can!
| Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:18 CDT
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These two are trying to keep a deep attraction, mutual respect and a growing love on a casual dating-level. *rubs forehead* I so want to jump inside the fic and yell some truths right now... I hope they have at least established that they are in like with each other now, so that they don't need to doubt each other on that anymore. And yes, we've gotten to know some of Inuyasha's fears, but it seems there's still this major fear he doesn't even want to think about. I can guess, but I won't. As for Kagome... Something's bothering me and I can't nail it in words. The closest thing I get to say what I mean is that I think she's too focused on the therapeutic aspects of dating and relationships. I'm sorry, I've tried to figure out what I mean myself. A splendid chapter as always, offering an emotional rollercoaster yet again (you're so good at those). My personal favourite was when Inuyasha called Kagome's name in her "appartement". Tons of emotions there! The "mystery man" is still unnamed (me like) and things are not setteled between Sango and Inuyasha (is she mad or might she understand?), plus I wonder why the heck Kagome believes sex is far away with Inuyasha. I mean, I don't believe they'll jump each other, but... that's not a good attitude. How can she respond to the emotions of the moment if she has this mental little schedule where everything's planned up? No wonder she gets insecure then. Life's not like that. It bursts in and flood you with emotions you KNOW you won't be able to handle, but there it is: love, pain and pleasure all in a mix and it's just to go with the flow or drown. I'm probably mispretting this due to my own emotional state right now, but still. And oh, I would use your recepies if I knew how to turn on a stove. That's why I never comment the recepies: I can't cook. At all. Thank you for yet another eyefiest (wonderful words) and take care!
| Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:05 CDT
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I really really enjoy the grown-up aspect you create with your stories. I do get tired of reading stories from a child/teen's point of view, where they view the world as a happy place without adult problems. This has to be the most seriously correct story i have ever read. (minus the fact that there are demons and such :) the lamb rolls turn out delicious, but it tasted even better with chicken lol. I didnt add the jalapenos, but i think they turned out good. Do you think this new reciepe would taste okay over turkey? I would have to drive to a speciality shop to get duck, seeing how that isnt sold at my local farmer jacks. :) But good chapter, i can't wait to see what they do on their second date, and how they function using this communication. Keep up the good work! oh yeah, when you get the reciepe for the tamales with red bean paste, could you either post it with your story or send it to me in an email? I have no time to actually dig for reciepes with work being so crazy but if you can, it would be appreciative.
| Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 16:45 CDT
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I'm gaining 10Lbs just by reading all of your delicious recipes. Kudos for Miroku not letting up on Inuyasha and helping him get to the root of things. Kudos,for sending Inu to talk to Kagome's mom, she is really nice and really is the best person for Inu to get some feedback on Kagome. Estaticly pleased that my favorite hanyou and perpetual woman/girl are going to give it another try, they deserve it. Hmmmm, more kisses between them, I like the sound of that. Well great chapter as usual and looking forward to your next installment.
| Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: May 16, 2007 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how to explain it exactly, but your fic inspires me. I used to cook constantly and loved doing so, but have lost touch with my passion over time. You reminded me of why I loved cooking in the first place. It's relaxing, almost meditative in fact, and I love sharing it with my friends and family. I can defiantly relate to your Kagome's anxiety when waiting for a critics opinion. Thank you for helping bring my passion for food back to life. Although, I don't have the time to prepare timely meals like I used to. That fact was proved to me the other night when I was half-way done cooking and I got called to some horrible car wreck. That's the sacrifice I guess I've chosen to make. Choosing less time-consuming meals in exchange for being a volunteer firefighter. You give a little to get a little and I find my happy medium between my 2 passions. I guess it's good when my passions mix too. Like the time a car hit a deer and some of the guys from the station took it back and made ka-bobs. Completely totaled the car. God, they're such rednecks. Lol. I can't tell you how excited I get each time you post a new chapter. I really look forward to it each week. You're very talented and you're very detailed. I consider you as one of the top writers on the site and one of the best if seen in my few years of reading fanfics. I applaud you and can't wait until your next chapter. Good luck and see you then. Your loyal fan elo. ...Wow, I just reread some of that and I sound like an amazing kiss-ass. Go me? Just kidding. I guess it's not so bad since you deserve it. Lol.
| Title: dressing?
Reviewed By: nick_in_love On: May 14, 2007 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im try to make my girlfriend a all homade dinner, cuz she just deserves it and i was wonderinf if u could add your salad dressing recipies to the next chapter, great work!
| Reviewed By: Eve_Dallas [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am just in awe of what you are doing! I love this story and I rememeber reading that you are in school and working .. and you pound out this story so that we can have a new chapter each week! That, imo, is trully amazing! and you give us such yummy recipies as well. ^^ I sooo look forward to your new chapters each week and am so greatful that you have kept the integrity of the story. I know a lot of authors that get real busy irl and either just gloss over everything over real quick to finish the story or just not post or ever and a day. I dont blame them bc they have a right to be busy in their own lives, but I want to say that I am truly greatful that you post a chapter each week and I never mind that you are a few days late or anything. I am currently in the same stiuation and I just come home and pass out. lol So, anyway your writing is amazing and I thank you for this wonderful story. btw, I love that quote you had in the latest chapter, its beautiful :D
| Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well it put me back together, and i have discovered that i vibrate before i explode. (why didn't i think of that earlier...?) *vibrates* ... But i feel sorry for whatever hentai is taking avantage of it when i explode. XD ☺
| Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 04:21 CDT
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Stop reading? Not likely. Taking the bad with the good is part of life. I just like to linguer on the positive aspects for a while. It must have been hell for Inuyasha to find out he's supposed to be gone for a whole week...and the first thing he did was heading straight for Kagome, so sweet! But then... because of that wonderful date, there's no way for them to adress the "next meeting" matter casual anymore. I'm sure Inuyasha really wanted to scope up Kagome in his arms and kiss her, but knew that would bite him in his ass since he was about to leave for a week. And after all, he's not the psychologist nor a woman, so he couldn't predict how Kagome was going to react. And who sais he's not as scared as her? He's been struggling with his emotions way longer than she has so his fear of rejection must be off the chart! Anyway, I'm so glad you wrote a girlgathering and we got to meet Kouga's latest litter, just like I wanted! Poor Kagome... she doesn't realise that her dating problem hasn't got anything to do with age or experience. It's always easy to date when your heart's not in it; anyone can have a good time with anyone if your heart's not at stake. And oh, I love your version of Mama Higurashi. She reminds me of my own mom, except my mom is a little bit more rought with her wording and honest to the point of being blunt. : )Perhaps I should spread this story to her too?
| Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 01:58 CDT
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Stupid Baka Inuyasha,he is sooo not going to like what he's walking back into when he get home from his trip. Why didn't he just tell Kagome more than just bye, don't he know women need reasons,explainations and details, we cannot live on cryptic messages. Now he's got Kagome second guessing everything and she seems like she's about to make another misinformed decision concerning their relationship. Sango wasn't really any help, see that's why doctors and patients can't be friends. I think she could've offered a little bit more support in the "don't drop him yet" dept. Eri,Yuka and Ayame, I know they're her friends but sheesh, they don't know Inuyasha at all the least they could've said is talk to him first before you end it. Kagome Kagome Kagome, I thought that maybe she had her insecurties licked after she decided to leave Hojo but I guess I was wrong. She needs a dose of modern women, we don't wait anymore for answers to fall from the sky, we go and pluck them out ourselves. Please make her stronger so she can see that life isn't going to wait for her. Thanks again to Mama Higurashi for her sound advice. Read ya later ;)
| Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 00:26 CDT
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OMG! I can totally feel Kagome's angst like a stone on my chest. You have a true gift in your writing. From the high of the 1st date down to the lows of the post-date week. Jeez, did he not even have a moment to spare to say something positive about the date and/or future dates? Whatever the business trip is about had better be wicked important!
| Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 23:02 CDT
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wow, that chapter was very intro-personal. I liked the deep meaningful conversations between mother and daughter, and then later between kagome and her circle of friends. Its a great way of revealing feelings and emotions. I have my own gatherings like that, except we're slightly darker, and have midnight meetings in a cemetary. (the tombstone of the person who brought us all together.) So i really enjoyed this chapter, and i love how you manage to update around the time you said you would. that shows great dedication to your stories. Anyways, the ginger soy sauce was yummy, and i think the stirfry turned out pretty good. My roommate ate three plates full. But the sizzling rice cakes didnt quite turn out that well. Im not very good with a fryer. oh well. I cant wait to try the lamb rolls. I think i will try the lamb first, then maybe chicken. Im not a big fan of lamb, but im willing to try anything. And i personally dont like veal, but to each their own. :) Great chapter, and congrats on getting a beta. See you next week.
| Title: ^^b
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 03:00 CDT
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I like this weekly update thing you've got going on. And my favourite chapter so far!! What a sweet kiss, and I loved 'If I fuck the date up, at least i'll have gotten something out of it' XDD They still have a lot of talking to do though. Keep up the good work.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have followed along from the beginning and absolutely adore this. I really do. I think you've really brought the story around. And I like the fact that its not rushed. Oh, I get anxious too, lol, but I like how this is slowed down a touch. I also like the characters and how you've made them. They're own, but yours as well. And with this last chap, am gonna have to try out some of those recipes you posted, lol. Till next time, Update when ya can! ;)
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