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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 18:27 CDT
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I love it!!!!!! So much!!!!!!! Hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 12:28 CDT
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that dream had me totally fooled at the beginning...i wonder whats up with hojo...
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 17:50 CDT
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splendent....so why is she wit homo...i mean hojo? if i was her i'd b crying i ned a man that pleasures me first...not him self......b come a massuse sumtin....and having his child i don't know....and inuyasha wats his deal....if he hasn't acted like this wit other women...then it means somthing....and if she really wanted to get pregnant she should get sexy or masterbate a little ...like get it to the point where she's already worked up for hojo so .......abd yasha could always add veggies to his nooddles....and how old r ya.....its good so far
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Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 16:45 CDT
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This is great! I love the subject matter and the reality of the situation. You're doing a good job, and I love your style of writing =) Not the usual ^^ The story is suprisingly original, too! I'll definately stick around for updates now that i'm hooked. But damn girl, its so frustrating!!! Just make Inuyasha jump Kagome's bones already XD Hojo is SO cheating on her =) If only the world were perfect XD Update soon!
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: March 20, 2007 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah! When is inu and kags gonna be together? This is getting nowhere T.T I want kags to be with inu, not hojo! Anywho please write more ^^
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The dinner is nothing short of brilliant, loaded with symbolism as it is. Everyone has their own answer to why they are there and what they plan to have said or discovered before the night is over. I love the way Sango and Miroku immediately thought of ways for them to enjoy Kagomes meals, while Hojos though was that the recepy would fit in a cookbook. There's the very core of the problem: he's too distant. Nothing wrong with that, really, but that's what makes him a bad combination with Kagome. I can see why Kagome wants to get pregnant, but it also seems to me that her will to experience good sex has increased a lot...not for the pleasure alone, but for the intimacy. Isn't that after all what she really craves: to be so close to a person that it feels like you never can lose him? Isn't that what a child can give her? Anyway, I really hope you will let Inuyasha and Kagome form a romantic relationship--in due time. They are after all my one and only favourite couple. Have a good time writing next chapter and enjoy yourself!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolute wonderful original story. You have great writing techniques. I am really into this and can't wait to see the outcome. How will Inuyasha and Kagome cross that line between patient and doctor (if they do). Will Inuyasha be the catalyst in Kagome getting pregnant. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 01:51 CDT
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Ohh.. Hojo is such a bore. I knew that scene was NOT Hojo and Kagome. lol. I am proud that Inuyasha is behaving right now... or even showed up. I am interested to see how the main course and dessert will go. Maybe dessert can spice things up with Kagome and Inuyasha. :o) Wonderful job on this! I love authors that can write differently for each of their stories. It's amazin!
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Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: March 19, 2007 19:25 CDT
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Please continue to write. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 00:29 CST
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very good story...its got good character development, good plot...and the characters are pretty well in character...great job, im glad i found this story.
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Reviewed By: Eve_Dallas [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! another chapter! Thank you so much... for the next month almost i will be soooo busy that i probly wont get to come online so its gret that this chapter is out before i get really busy! hehe you have great timing :D this was great... I wondered if they were going to have to talk about kagome's 'problems'. hahaha Inuyasha was all squirmy, it was great! lol ugh, the more you unveil things about hojo, the less I like him. He is kind of trapping her in this lifestyle, and not trying anything to help their situation. It was totaly bugging me! oh well I guess I side with Inuyasha on this one.. its not his fault. >.> As always great chapter, keep on writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess Tiger Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good update! I especially like the twist with Kagome being so into food and cooking as a counterpoint to the show/manga Inuyasha's obsession with ramen. That it is a mature, professional interest she has in food, rather than your stereotypical run of the mill woman in the kitchen type thing, makes it all the better! I am looking forward to the dinner chapter, and to seeing how you manage to resolve the doctor/patient crossing of boundaries it would normally be for a doctor to go to a patient's house, even if her husband _was_ there! (I'm a social worker by trade) One of the other things I like about this story is that although it is a kind of sexual coming-of-age for Kagome, it is again done in a way that isn't stereotypical - a magical first sexual encounter. Rather, she has been in the _real_ world, had and been exposed to various experiences, and yet hasn't yet come into her own, into her power. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 17:17 CST
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can't wait for the dinner chapter. sounds like inuyasha is getting closer and closer to going after kagome.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 20:58 CST
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Its good to see some mature and well written stories here. I've enjoyed reading your story greatly and cannot wait to continue it. Keep up the great work! Its fun to see how everything goes, and of course I'm rooting for the Kagome and Inuyasha pair, although I feel bad for Hojo...haha. =)
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Reviewed By: Eve_Dallas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so im am so STOKED to see what happens next! She said it herself, he has been there for her through everything but she doesnt love him passionately. He's more of a really good friend or brother and you just dont do that stuff with those people. Do you think that sango knows about her fantasies? I hope not bc if Inuyasha and sango have another one of those lunches she could be very uncomfortable. she already knows that he likes her. Anyway, im glad that she's airing this out. The psychological portion of concieving is just as important to the physical part, for sure. KEEP WRITING, you're doing a great job!
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