| "The War of Survival" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: lara5170 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2016 19:40 PDT
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I have enjoyed reading this but I'm curious I noticed you didn't
use Sessh as an option for Kagome to be with in this. Since he's a
dog demon too and in this story could she end up with him or is it
only Naruto characters for her?
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 09:04 PST
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awesome update, I loved it, though it was kind of sad. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 19:33 PDT
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please update soon it has been awhile and its a really good story please please please update
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 12:29 PDT
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i say update(a.k.a. good story i really like it so update soon)
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Title: The War of Survival: Weapons ( Chapter 8 )
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 15:17 PDT
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i say neij and kags should set to get there
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 16:57 PDT
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Dang the chapters over......Every time I read I get sad ...... Naruto is too koo to die dang it.........*I feal so dang depressed right now and this just reminds me of the horrible way Naruto died*......Do you think that they could send Kagome back to where she was befor she was taken away I'm mean if she is the same age wouldn't it have been more effective if she lived out her life and got more expirence.....this just Isn't fun...*pouting to self*...........please update soon..........Nyuka
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Title: finish please
Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 18:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue, i really love it when Kagomes all strong and powerful and in control.
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Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 14:13 PDT
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cant belive narutos dead at least he died with honor for his village
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 22:34 PDT
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NNNNNnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..........................Why did you do that ....I was already in pain at the fact that he died why did you have to turn him in to a puppet....Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.....*sob softly to self* I feel my heart is in the a deep sarrow of pain, I didn't want him to die and now you bring him back as a puppet like Kuhaku....I don't like it, I realy don't.....................(ok focasing my mind) ......I just started reading you fic and it is a very nice one if I do say so my self I just wish that Naruto didn't die....that is so sad and now hes a puppet and even if he snapped out of puppet mode Kagome would have to kill him to get the fragment....its not fair....she was in enough pain as it was and I can feel that pain .....I truly feel that I can.....I hope thing will work out for the better............Nyuka *cry soft tears of pain*
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 02:09 PDT
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i vote for kagome/neji
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one awsome fanfic :) please update sooN!!!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 12:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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....i know!TT_TT can;t naruto really be alive just hidding out reganing his strangth?!?!?! TT_TT please?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 11:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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kagome/neji or kagome/sasuke ^_^ i love this story so far!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 02:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me! I loved your story so far and i have read all of your fanfics !Keep writing please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagome told sasuke good.
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, update.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 23:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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BAWWWWWW Koga is back!!! YAY lol i love it ^^
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Koga!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 11:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 01:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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sorry i havent been here for awhile >.< but awww i WANT TO THE PAIRINGS!!!! its killing me T-T wheres sesshy!?! *shifty eyes* hmmm anyways still great!! update when ya can!!
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 19:56 PDT
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I loved it ^^ Please make it a Sasuke/Kagome Pairing. It was such a hot Lemon >.< So please tell us what are the Pairings when not Sasuke/Kagome? And please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 10:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no anger here, loved the chapter.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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whoa.... itachi jealous much? how old is he now? he sexy no more?! what ever i still thing naruto should come back from the grave to have kagome.(more ways than one too) heehee!! will more of those delicious lemons come soon? ja ne!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 16:35 PDT
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up date soon!!!!!!!lemons are coming soon?!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 06:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea, you updated!
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 20:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUST! Read! MORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 14:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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why naruto???!!!! why!!!? i loved his character soo much!!! he was perfect for kagome too!! please up date soon!!! (can naruto make a come back? will there be lemons?)
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 08:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 09:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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up date up date up date up date up date up date up date up date up date up date up date!!!
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