| "The Love of the Rose Hime" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I'm late I was sick and had a lot of things to work on. Yeah!!! I can't wait for Sess to meet heero so he can break him to his very soul crys out for help! I know Sess's family is far more powerful then his and that along breaks any under minded things he would try, but I want to see sess make him bleed out for what he almost did (and trying to do again!) F**King ass #%#%@$^^^$$$###!!!!! now that taht's said. I also loved the talk Sess and Naraku had. You're one of the best at telling a story ya know!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! Ding dong the bitch is gone!! I love how everything is coming along and I can't wait to see the wadding!!! Inu and Sess are beautifully done in this story and I thank you for giving us all your gift! Till Next Time
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I knew that rat of bitch, mother fucker try or had raped her! Once again never thought i see the day I love naraku so much!!!! I hope him and Sess meet naraku and he ask him to show him this teeru bitch. And OMG Wedding!!!!!! AHHHHHHHH!!! I love how your minds works!!! Well loved all the chapter as always. till next time!!! *huggles*
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Title: Simply wonderful...
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 15:15 CDT
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So sorry that I've not had time to review until now, and that I'm behind of your chapters (I'm still on eight!)but I'll start there. I loved it! Especially the part where Sesshomaru's dad left him to fend off the "hungry" women. Ah, how I'd love to be one of them...Oh, anyways! And it is about time that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru met again (Reunited and it feels so good...^_~)but I'd be more than freaked out if I met the boy that I'd been dreaming of since chldhood (if there ever was such a boy, can't remember him...)All in all, a great chapter and a great story! Yet, you know that if I don't review immediatly, you know why...yeah, I hate it too. Well, keep up the great work and in the famous words of you, B~reading~U!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great chapter I think I know what happen to Inuyasha. I came and review again
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Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 16:38 CST
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(sniffling) I...am...so...touched! "My little sista!" I feel so honored! Okay, enough of me, this review is about you and the story. I'm happy I'm not the only one who finds Naraku attractive. Even as a bad guy. Though he and Sesshomaru both look like they could do with a bit of sun (I knew Sessy's always walking around but he still looks pale.) I wonder what Heero did to upset Inuyasha? Then again, I'd have a problem with him the moment he said "my woman". If there's one thing that really turns me off about a guy, it's posessivness! All in all, a great chapter. I don't have time to read the next one now so I'll have to get back to you on the reviews for that one. Only suggestion I have (and don't think I'm being a bitch for this, please!) is that perhaps you should slow down a bit with writing. But I'm not really trippin' because if you look back on some of my chapters, I have errors out the wazoo (one of my mom's words, wazoo!)
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahahhhhhhhhhhahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhhahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh hhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now that, that's out of the way. I CAN BELIEVE THEY'RE LOOKING AT ONE ANOTHER RIGHT!!!! Please tell me they will talk more and Rin already likes her!!! Sessh can keep her save from that damn teero or whatever! And I never thought I would say this but...I LOVE NARAKU!!!! He is soo kick ass in this he could beat the shit out of that guy, and be in his right for that asshat is herasing Inu so there! I love it!!!! I even got my love to read this and now he's all like "so what happen next" hehe till next time
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 07:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH!!!! Okay so please tell me in the next chapter Sessy and Inu find one another!!! Oh I was in love with that almost fight that was about to go down. I always wanted to make Naraku good too. So is this new guy (Teeru i think?) gonna need a ass kicking? Ahhh I need more so you do what you got to do so i can get that next chapter Rose7!! And you go girl with a hubby like that!! My love looks more like Inuyasha as a human long hair and all, only he has golden eyes and people always ask him "How you get eyes like that? are they real??" girl were just lucky to have the world best ne? haha update soon!! till next time
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Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:42 CST
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I'm not sure that I would've been as calm as Kisa was to Mrs.Wannabe, I mean, Mrs.Wantanabae. I probably would have said "Excuse me? You could try to be a little kinder!" Or maybe not. I'm a pretty quiet person and I rarely have problems with adults. But I really liked this chapter! So, what part of destiny does this fit into, I wonder?...Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 04:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH I LOVE IT!!! I don't really get into the one where Inu girl cuz people take him soo out of his self, but you are awesome!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! I need to see what happens when they meet again!!!? And I need to see the end so many people start these awesome story and then never see through to the end so PLEASE do!!! and look for more of works to come after this one!
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Title: Wonderful story
Reviewed By: kagome846 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the concept and your idea for an alternate universe. I have really enjoyed your story. Please PLEASE update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 16:19 CST
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So sorry that I havn't reviewed until now! I've read your other two chapters and I'll simply save space by reviewing them here. They were all great! It seems that we both have a thing for Friday! Yeah, I recognized the "you got knocked the fuck out" part! And cool how you worked the brothers from the band of seven (I think that's what they were called) into the story. I must admit that it's also pretty weird (in a good way!) reading a story where Sesshomaru's out of character. I'm used to writing him like that but to read it from someone else is a bit of a surprise! But it was nice to see a loving Seshy. Though...seems like though he was married to Kagura, he still was thinking about Inuyasha...so he's almost no better than her. Only difference is, he hasn't taken action yet. All in all, loving the story! Please don't worry if I don't review your next chapters as soon as they come out; internet time is limited. In your own words, B~reading~U!
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Title: Erotic Dreams!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An update! That dream was the hotness...*fans self* I'm glad that you've aged the characters so that they can progress in their relationship in a timely manner...it's been so long since Inuyasha and Sesshomaru met, she doesn't remember his name. I wonder if she'll recognize her mystery (dream) lover. I hope so... One quick question--I might be confused (and believe me, that's a constant state for me), but I thought you said Inuyasha was 22 years old when she wakes up from her dream, but when you flash back to her mother's death, you say it was 11 years earlier and she was 7. If that's the case, shouldn't she be only 18 or was it 15 years earlier? Anyway, enough rambling--I enjoyed it!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good! I didn't expect that you'd have Sesshomaru as a child, but it's nice to read something out of the norm because most people have Sesshomaru living the life he supposedly had before Inuyasha and leading up to the events that perhaps made him the way he is on the show. I'm not criticizing those people, but I am praising your creativity! And the little female versiion of Inuyasha is adorable! Is she based off of one of your children? The grammer was on point with her too. And who knew that Sesshomaru's father could actually be loving toward his son? Perhaps that's all the real Sesshomaru needs is s a hug (just playing!). All in all, it was great! Update soon! The one and only Amanda aka Fluffymiyster ~B reading U!~
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Nikkie!!! Since I was the first to review on aff.net, I wanted to be the first here. I think you have a great story idea, and your execution was well done. You jumped into the action, grabbing the reader's interest, and keeping it until the end. Can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the good work!
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