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| "I love you, Loveless." Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Tidus_9293 On: February 25, 2007 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
please recheck the grammar and spelling because it is really very disturbing when it is read...
| Reviewed By: SeReNiTy_9293 On: February 25, 2007 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fanfic... ^_^ i really enjoyed it... about the ratings, i gave the spelling and grammar a bit of a low score because there were errors in the fanfic, and im sort of a correction freak.. T_T sorry... i liked the style of writing in its own way that there weren't a lot of big paragraphs, but its just that i'm not good at giving perfect scores because i believe that there is always a room for improvement, and not having a perect score can act as a motivation or people... i put a 9 on the originality/creativity for pretty much the same reason. as of the enjoyment factor, the story definitly rocks! i couldn't ask for a better fanfic... please make more... ^_^ the overall rating is just the average of my ratings.. ^_^ i apologize if in any way,my ratings and reasons offended your writing... i'm also sorry for giving out boring reasons... i just gave you what you wanted, an opinion...
| Reviewed By: fadingdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice spelling mistakes? Ever heard of a beta? This sentence makes no fucking sence.. "He was dressed only in a couple of large, grey flanel-trousers" How do you dress in a couple of trousers? This is a really bad hob. Get a beta,edit it, and repost it.
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