| "I love you, Loveless." Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh! i love Loveless and this is the first fanfic ive read of it.... but wow. that was so amazing. and kawaii!!!..... you are now one of my favorite fanfic authors!.... keep up the fantastic work ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lady_Niongi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 22:59 CDT
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Doushite" is why? "So ka" is like I see and "ano" is "ano" like umm... ^^ Other then that your spelling was pretty good. Make sure you look up on the spelling for japanese words don't just try to sound them out b/c you can mess up :D
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Title: *sniff*
Reviewed By: Lady_Niongi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 22:58 CDT
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I have no idea why the rest of my review didn't go thru...I really loved this fic :D LOVE LOVELESS, the heartbreaking parts, and the lemons parts. *rawr* Now I noticed alot of people said spelling but it's not english I'm noticing! "Doushite"
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Lady_Niongi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this fic :D LOVE LOVELESS, the heartbreaking parts, and the lemons parts. *rawr* Now I noticed alot of people said spelling but it's not english I'm noticing! "Doushite"
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Title: awsomeeee
Reviewed By: Beware_the_hate_after_love On: July 20, 2007 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! good lemonyness. =) Keep up the greatness!!!
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW! BEST ENDING EVERR! Uwa! You totally just made my day XD Some minor spelling problems, but the plot and detail were just great! I felt bad for Soubi when the doctor first told him that Ritsuka was cutting himself =[ But the lemony goodness and extremely well thought-out ending really made me happy! Well, happy writings! Ja =]
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Reviewed By: T.T Yaoijunky T.T On: May 18, 2007 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo good! ^.^ You are a very good writer but you really need to work on your spelling.The sad parts made me cry so hard and that is very difficult to do. The lemon made me wet *blushes*. Kotos to you sweetheart! Keep up the good work .
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Reviewed By: Ritsu-chii On: April 04, 2007 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you've heard this, but the spelling needs work. But, the storyline is great! Keep up the good work. (His name is Aoyagi :P)
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Reviewed By: Lori On: March 17, 2007 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.... that doesn't even explain it good enough.....AMAZING.... i luved those two soooo much!!! on tope of that you let them both play the uke n' the seme which is great!! i hope you make more stories!!! WOOT or even a continuation!! other than the FEW grammar n' spelling errors...n' the mist pronouced japanese words i think you did an awsome job KEEP IT UP!!! WOOT!!!
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Reviewed By: hatochan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice fic :) i started giggling during the whole sex scene, not because of any mistake on your part, for some reason Ritsuka screaming out " Fuck me harder!" just struck me as funny. but in a good way:) obviously, there are a few things that can be improved upon, like anyone else's work, but overall you have a good start and should continue to develop your personal voice. good luck and i look forward to more! also, ignore the "review" from fadingdreams. those types of comments are not helpful, any useful critique is lost within the crude and abusive language. also, fadingdreams misspelled two words in his/her review; though i'm sure they will claim sarcasm to cover the mistake.
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Reviewed By: natsumi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, The spelling is an issue xD Next time, I suggest you re-read every 5 paragraphs as you write them(Write 5 paragraphs, re-read, contine, etc) It's easier that way ;3 Your style of writing and originality is kind of general. Well, a little above adverage ^^. Still, try improving on your voice. If you do, you'll end up famous someday with your own personal proofreader!! -laughs- =] Anyways I give it 2 thumbs up(excluding the grammar issues).
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Reviewed By: corvetti On: March 04, 2007 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did an amazing job on this story. I truly enjoyed it, but I highly recomend some sort of spelling/grammar check to get rid of the little things like "to" where you meant "two"... etc... Keep up the wonderful creativity. I hope to read more of you work :)
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Reviewed By: Tidus_9293 On: February 25, 2007 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
please recheck the grammar and spelling because it is really very disturbing when it is read...
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Reviewed By: SeReNiTy_9293 On: February 25, 2007 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fanfic... ^_^ i really enjoyed it... about the ratings, i gave the spelling and grammar a bit of a low score because there were errors in the fanfic, and im sort of a correction freak.. T_T sorry... i liked the style of writing in its own way that there weren't a lot of big paragraphs, but its just that i'm not good at giving perfect scores because i believe that there is always a room for improvement, and not having a perect score can act as a motivation or people... i put a 9 on the originality/creativity for pretty much the same reason. as of the enjoyment factor, the story definitly rocks! i couldn't ask for a better fanfic... please make more... ^_^ the overall rating is just the average of my ratings.. ^_^ i apologize if in any way,my ratings and reasons offended your writing... i'm also sorry for giving out boring reasons... i just gave you what you wanted, an opinion...
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Reviewed By: fadingdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice spelling mistakes? Ever heard of a beta? This sentence makes no fucking sence.. "He was dressed only in a couple of large, grey flanel-trousers" How do you dress in a couple of trousers? This is a really bad hob. Get a beta,edit it, and repost it.
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