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Reviewed By: Jen (nope) On: March 10, 2007 05:47 CST
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Yea Axel!!!! Great ending. I'm so glad it was a happy ending. You're becoming a regular little hentai with these lemons (woo hoo!) You rawk sista! Awesome, awesome, awesome!
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Reviewed By: Jen (too lazy to sign in) On: March 03, 2007 08:44 CST
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Hot damn! We finally get some emotion from Satoru. Good chapter. Short, sweet and to the point. What I want to know is how did Satoru find Rei? Did he follow her? Argh! So many questions. I guess I'll just have to stay tuned for the next episode....
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Reviewed By: 'Tina On: March 01, 2007 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Axel-chan!! I'm not completely caught up yet but I just read chapters four and five and I love how you had Artimis and Chidori in there. It seems like Artie's personality has really changed since he has been with Chidori. And he has THE SCAR!!!!! I just knew that Sat was going to catch Zack and Rei. :P Very angst. Reminds me of a certain other author that we both know. I love it! I'm excited to read the next four chapters!!
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Reviewed By: Jen (please) On: March 01, 2007 12:07 CST
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You know you're stealing Kiki's term, "Lovelies"? Yeah... anyhow... you are evil. I think she may very well sign the papers now but he might tear them up in a fit of rage or something (it seems very soap opera-y). Satoru.... you got some 'splaining to do!!! I don't think that anything blondie says is gonna go over well. Although I do think that Rei might feel better if she kicked the crap out of blondie.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 16:04 CST
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grumble...no papers, NO threesome. blonde chic better complain that he called out to REI when he was screwing around with her. after all, rei might say she didn't sleep with Zach, but she was considering it. and Satoru only did what he thought, to see if they really were too young when they married, were they meant to be. not the greatest excuse, hell, not even an excuse, but those two don't TALK. this is what happens. will it be the same bat time, same bat channel??
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Reviewed By: Jen (yeah right) On: February 25, 2007 18:39 CST
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That was all kinds of sweet. It's also kind of sad knowing what happens later. I think it's funny 'cause now the Rei haters can't hate her quite so much. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 16:03 CST
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damn it...now i just can't full dis-like her. they waited two years apart...which means they can handle it, they've jsut forgotten how. god they were stonger as kids. morons. sorry, had to vent there. now i might just be rooting for the happy. damn. they (especially sato) were always worried about being too young and not experiencing anyone else, but when they get the chance to, when the relationship has probelms, they are thinking of no one but each other. shit. i REALLY want to see where this goes with those divorce papers hanging overhead.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: February 23, 2007 15:49 CST
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wel...ahem, talk about taking the plunge to get over her. she did leave him hanging though and he had no idea what she was doing or if she was having sex with the other man. my question is-who's the blond??? and he's obviously not getting over her if he's still wishing that hard and having the best sex of his life, while cheating, thinking of rei. god, or axel in this case, please for these two into therapy!! i want to know what goes through their minds!!! i know if i can just dislike rei-cause sato doesn't tell her a damn thing either! but i do dispise her parents. hanging on here...
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Reviewed By: Jen (nsi) On: February 23, 2007 14:12 CST
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Oh Shit! Damn, girlie that was hella interesting. It was a good first shot at a lemon, too. That last line is killer. Why is it always your last lines that get me? (And I downloaded the song so I'll have to listen to it later)
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Reviewed By: Jen (nsi) On: February 22, 2007 12:48 CST
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Wow! I got a chapter dedicated to me. :) Be careful what you wish for Rei...I feel bad for her and for Satoru. But I can relate to their problem. It's only going to get worse before it gets better. I kinda' feel bad for Zack, too. He didn't know that Rei was married and when he found out he felt bad (but he still wants her...) I can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: February 22, 2007 09:00 CST
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odd...shouldn't rei be, i don't know...happy? she flat out told him she didnt' want him to need her. well, now he doesn't and she feels like shit. what does the woman want!!! females. wait, i am one, never mind. so much pain, but neither of them really knows what a happy, healthy marraige is. you have to need the other person as well as being able to function if they have to go for a time. rei seems to want him totally independant of her. she let so much time pass, of course he was going to think she was with the other man. and she's still wanting zach to call her!! gah!! i feel for satoru. right at the moment he has no idea (well, neither does rei, but i have a thing against her at the moment. she may still redeem herself to me) what to think. he makesthe grand decision that he's going to fight, he's going to be strong for the woman he still loves, and she is more confused than him. does she want to cheat all the way? will she feel guilty...but still want the guy to call her...so she can feel guitly some more. i'm looking for forward to seeing where you take them!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: February 21, 2007 12:40 CST
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yeah, you snagged another reviewer...didn't you say there was another chapter in the works here??? you've got me hooked! god what a @#$% you to sato. just when he's ready...she's not. but it is fitting. i am extrememly disappointed in her family though. encouraging her to go out with a married man after not even a full night away from her husband. hell, that's great role models, go against your families wishes and yeah, you can cheat, as long as we like him. i really want to know how rei feels. and if zach cares that she's married. will he try to convince her that what she wants and needs is to go away with him? but then, what should she think...a married man wants her to run away with him. does he make it a habit to pick up other men's wives? see...you made me ponder...now my head hurts!
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Reviewed By: Jen (nis as always) On: February 19, 2007 07:14 CST
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Good chapter Ax! I like that you brought back Artemis and Chidori for a quick cameo. You've been taking cues on cliffies from Kiki I think.
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Reviewed By: Jen (who is way too lazy to sign in) On: February 16, 2007 22:42 CST
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That last line hurt. I'm torn because I want Rei to be happy but I want Satoru to be happy, too. *Sigh* It's a good thing I'm sitting on Kiki's angst couch ('cause between you two I'm all kinds of angsty tonight). Great story, girlie. I can't wait to see how everything plays out.
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Reviewed By: Jen (nsi) On: February 12, 2007 05:52 CST
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This story keeps getting better and better. It's so sad. I'm hoping for a happy ending for this one (strange how in one story I hope for a not so happy ending and in another I want a happy ending) Keep it up!
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