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| "Such a Small World" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a good fic, please update, when ever possible :-)
| Reviewed By: northernmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 15:42 CST
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I confess that I've been reading this story and haven't reviewed yet...sorry! I've really enjoyed this story so far especially the dynamic between H&K. I like to believe that a relationship can recover from this type of thing. I'm also curious what you're going to do with Kurama and Keiko. Thanks for sharing your story!
| Reviewed By: FrozenTearDrop [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another awesome chapter! keep it up!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 02:48 CST
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Another terrific chapter!! I absolutely loved the Kagome/Hiei stuff! Thank goodness they're working things out and are staying close. I like it that Kagome is starting to seem stronger to Hiei. And he told her he loves her -- Yay! And he'd still like to get his hands on Inuyasha for messing up her mind in the first place. Me, too. But, I'm looking forward to Kagome showing and feeling she is worthy of Hiei's love. So, Kikyou has been cheating on Inuyasha and he doesn't know it? Ha! Love it. I wonder who she's cheating with? And she's even thinking of picking up another guy? Hoo hoo! I can't wait for him to find out what a fool he is. Loved the tidbit about Kagura talking about being free like the wind. LOL! And Bankotsu and Sango are so good together. I agree, he's much better than Miroku. Also loved the bit about Banyruu being his lucky baseball bat. It's so great how you keep throwing in these little details from the manga/anime and making them human/normal. And, of course, Bankotsu took a picture with his cell phone! Cute scene with Rin and Sesshoumaru. And Kurama just walked right in to Hiei's bedroom and got the shock of his life. I love it that he saw the peace and contentment Hiei feels with Kagome. That was nicely written. So, what does he want to talk to Hiei about? This is really such a wonderful story, and I'm loving it more and more with each chapter. I can't wait for the next one!!
| Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 00:26 CST
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Will Inuyasha and Kagome meet again? If so how will that go? What if Inuyasha really does love Kagome, but he went along with Kikyo's game, because perhaps he didn't really realize it, till it was to late? Does Inuayasha know about Hiei and Kagome being an item? What if Inuyasha gets the wind of what Yusuke did to Kagome, how will he react?, Feel? Will he go after Yusuke for hurting her? (that might be quite interesting.) How does Kikyo feel about Kagome? If she didn't have any problems with Kagome, then why did she and Inuyasha did what they did? If word gets around to the right people and if Kagome is well known, beloved member of town/citizen, they could get blackballed from everything from restaurants to hotels/motels, to renting movies. (Geese, ever since helping my friend with "Dynasty", I seem to be obsessed power and blackballing people.) Will Yusuke try to get Kagome again? He still has the sex tape, which Keiko and Yukina other then Yusuke knows about. It could be interesting if Inuyasha somehow gets hold of it. Maybe that's how he finds out about Yusuke forcing Kagome. Yikes, what would happen if Hiei gets the wind of this tape? How did Hiei and Kagome first met, was it before she and Inuyasha dating, during or after their breakup? What's the story between Kagome and Sesshomaru, Sesshomaru and Inuyasha? Please update ASAP.
| Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, I can't wait to read more
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 21:50 CST
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Awesome chapter! You really covered a lot of ground in that one. I love the way you revealed more about Kagome through Yusuke's thoughts about all the crazy people who might be gunning for him. That was so cleverly done. Loved Bankotsu and Jakotsu! You told a lot about them, too. And I was intrigued to hear that Jakotsu went after Inuyasha for hurting Kagome. Actually, now that I think about it, you told a lot about Kagome from a lot of different points of view. Kurama compared her to Keiko, and talked about her independence and the attraction she holds for Hiei. I was so intrigued by his idea that something may have to happen for her to learn to defend herself not necessarily physically, but to take up for herself). I look forward to seeing her become stronger. It's hard to see her so weak and broken and guilty. I love it that Bankotsu is wanting Kagome to stay with Hiei, AND that he wants to watch Hiei pummel Inuyasha. (I hope we get to see that, too!! Heh heh!) I liked the way Yukina told Keiko about Kagome, too, so she doesn't really blame her. (Of course, she felt she was coerced just from the tape she saw already.) It would be neat to have them meet and become friends. Kagome doesn't know Yusuke was married -- could THAT be the catalyst for her to get angry instead of guilty? This is just wonderful. I love the way you are fleshing out the characters and their relationships with each other. The first chapter was so sad and Kagome was so pathetic that I wasn't sure where this story would go. (Too much angst gets to me.) But this is such a full-bodied piece of work, and you are hitting all the right notes. So far, there are 3 real villains: Yusuke, of course, (and you even wove in a SLIGHT amount of sympathy for him -- just because he's a baka), Inuyasha, and Kikyou. Those two really make me sick playing around with others the way they do because they aren't really happy with each other, but seem to be addicted to each other. Yeah, I'd really like for Inuyasha to see or hear about Kagome and have some second thoughts about his feelings for her, so Hiei can mop up the floor with him. (Or maybe Kagome could do it herself!) I will be faithfully and anxiously awaiting your next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Laria [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 00:12 CST
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OOhh I can't wait to see what Bankotsu does to that idiot!! That was such a COOL story! I totally hope Hiei proposes later!
| Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 02:36 CST
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Does Kikyo really love Kagome or was she just saying that for Inuyasha's benefit? How protective is she towards Kagome? How does Sesshomaru feel about Kagome? Does Kagome and Inuyasha know of each other before or after she and Inuyasha was dating? How does he feel about Kagome dating his brother and now Hiei? How protective is he of her? If he is protective of her, what will he do, once word gets around about what had happened between her and Yusuke? Does Kagome know that Yusuke was married? Will she and Keiko ever meet and if so, how will that go? Have Yukina met Kagome and if so are they friends? If they are friends, where would that put her, since she is also friends with Keiko? Will Yusuke still try to get Kagome? What ever happened to the sex tape? Will Kagome and Inuyasha patch things up? Is Kikyo right about Inuyasha's love for her, or does she have doubts when it comes to his feelings for Kagome? Especially if the two become friends. What happens when Kagome is in trouble, despite how many friends are by her side, Inuyasha rushes to her side or he always calls to make sure she is all right? (Just thought Kikyo should taste of what she put Kagome through.) Wonder if Yusuke will try anything with Kagome, since he knows she has so far, other then Hiei two protective friends. Please update ASAP. Great story. Sorry I went overboard with questions.
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 01:48 CST
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Awesome chapter!! Yusuke is such a good villain -- what a jerk! He has brief thoughts that make you feel a LITTLE sympathetic, but then he immediately blows it with his utter stupidity. It was sad that his best friend is dead, and that his only other friends are now his enemies. (BTW, I love the references you keep making to these characters' OTHER personnas -- trying to "outfox" Kurama. Heh heh!) I wondered if Inuyasha and Kikyou were going to be in this as more than mentioned characters. Both of them sound like Yusuke -- they can't be happy, even with each other, unless they're living dangerously and playing with other peoples' hearts. Hmmmm. Wonder if Inuyasha might not decide he really DID have feelings for Kagome if he runs into her again. (I'd like for him to get a little of that Hiei and Bankotsu treatment.) And what was up with Kikyou trying to get Inu to think Kagome was seeing Sess? They really are twisted, aren't they? I liked the Kag/Hiei interaction with the ice cream and all. And I lOVED Bankotsu and Jakotsu there at the end! This is so good!
| Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is a little too insecure and thats kind of annoying but still I love the story. I keep waiting for Hiei to do something to make Kagome more secure in their relationship. Will Kagome and Keiko meet face to face? That would really give the story a twist. Keep up the good work and update please!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 04:05 CST
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Poor Keiko. When is Kurama going to see her? Will Yusuke wise up and try to talk to her? I like Bankotsu as Sango's boyfriend -- AND the fact that he doesn't like Inuyasha. And the tidbit about Miroku and Botan was great. Hmmm. Will Inu and Kikyou make an appearance? Poor Kagome, too. How will she get over the guilt? She really is terrible insecure, isn't she? It's great that Hiei has decided to work things out with her! I guess he listened to Kurama's advice somewhat, didn't he? It was interesting that Kuramam pointed out her insecurity about their relationship to him. Maybe she needs to find something to do to make her feel better about herself, or maybe something will happen that will help her see herself differently. This is really such an intersting take on these characters. Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 00:03 CST
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IT's great i can't wait till you update again. I do hope that you update soon. Untill then keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 03:24 CST
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Wow! What a dark, angst-ridden story. I don't know if I can read much more in one sitting without becoming completely depressed. I like the way you've written them as humans -- very unique way to present them. And I like the various relationships/friendships you've got going. But, whew! I hope Hiei and Kagome get a chance to be happy together. And Keiko and kurama. Now, Yusuke just needs his butt kicked.
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