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| "Such a Small World" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 06:12 CDT
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You can't imagine how thrilled I was to see another chapter for this out so soon!! You're a doll to feed my addiction. I really enjoyed the nice, long scene with Kagome and Hiei. Yes, I can't wait for Kagome to stop wallowing in her guilt, but it's very realistic of her to do so, I think. And I loved the way you shopwed her thoughts about such a simple gesture as Hiei holding her hand, -- that it was just so unlike him, that what in the world was she supposed to think? She liked it. It made her feel good. But, at the same time, to her, it was just an indication of how upset he must be to be acting out of character. And he thinks he's being comforting and reassuring. Honestly, you just nailed it! Such REAL reactions from both of them. I loved it that he could make her blush, though, and that he cut off her apology by kissing her. And then HOJO interrupted their moment. AAAuuuggghhh! LOL! I really liked Hiei's thoughts that Kagome was HIS responsibilty, and he didn't want Hojo offering gifts to help her sleep. And I LOVED the way he insisted Hojo call him Jaganshi. And then telling him that she is perfectly fine with his arms for comfort, and that it has worked many times vefore and that it will work many more times -- HA! I wanted to stand up and cheer. And the icing on the cake was when Kagome called him "Akitoki-san." THAT should have cemented in Hiei's mind her devotion to him. But, I loved the little moment of doubt you let slip back into Kagome's mind when Hiei told her he wouldn't tolerate him bringing her gifts to flit with her -- especially not at that moment in time. He really didn't say that well at all. He should have kicked himself. At least he hurried to explain it better. And I liked her bit of determination that she was tired of having something she wanted slip through her fingers. Go Kagome! I loved Hiei's irritation with Jakotsu calling him sweet little nicknames. That really made me giggle! And then Jak telling Hiei they would take care of her and get all ready to do the nasty when he came back -- LOL!! Oh, my stars! And I either hadn't realized it, or had forgotten that Hiei was Kagome's first. And then Jakotsu going on about how "that cute Urameshi" should not have been her first. Loved it! And Hiei had eavesdropped on her telling Sango about their first time -- LOL!! And more great moments for Bankotsu and Sango. I am REALLY loving that couple! And I can't wait for more!! There are SO many good things going on in this fic! It just makes me greedy for MORE!
| Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I just through re-reading your story again and I love it! I'm curious as to what's going to happen at the business party... especially with Kouga knowing who Kikyo is and stuff. I'm also curious as to what is going to happen to Yusuke? Well, update!
| Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yes i did like it but hojo in there so if coming like this hiei is bound to kill him but plz continue
| Title: Such a Small World
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 13:42 CDT
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I love it. I hope Sango, Bank, and Jak KILL Hojo - what a pussy. Lolz. Please update a.s.a.p!!!
| Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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man you're mean no hiei and kagome interaction but yusuke will stay single after what he did or go back with keiko but anyway plz continue
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 06:02 CDT
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Fabulous! I just love this story! Can I say again just how much I love your little dialogues between Jakotsu and Bankotsu? And Jak sitting down with some popcorn to watch Bank and Sango argue was priceless. I could just picture it! I love S and B's relationship -- they're so much fun together. I almost died laughing over Jakotsu's comment about what a cute couple he and Inuyasha would have made, "Him and his rough exterior, and me and my stunning beauty." ROFL!! And the way the three of them came to the realization that Hojo was just using Kagome, too, -- THAT was GOOD. I can't wait for him to show up somewhere. Poor Kagome, -- she really did attract some bums, didn't she? At least now she has Hiei! Wooooeeee! That Kikyou is one cold bitch. And she really DOES have Inuyasha twisted around her little finger. How blind can the guy be? I just can't WAIT for him to find out about all of her other lovers!!! He's overdue for reality to hit him smackdab in the face. THEN he'll regret tossing Kagome's love aside. Hmph. I loved Keiko's thoughts, and her curiosity about Kurama, AND Kagome. That poor girl needs to decide what to do about Yusuke. She is amazing in the way she feels sorry for Kagome, considering the circumstances, and I just love it that you're writing her that way, -- that she was able to see Kagome's fear and reluctance and not hold her being with Yusuke against her. I hope they get to meet and talk soon. Yet, I can completely understand Keiko's need to make her decisions about Yusuke first. And I wonder just how that rat is doing. Still holed up at his place recuperating? This was a terrific installment! (Even if Hiei and Kagome didn't make an appearance. LOL!) And thanks for the plug, by the way. I had to go to youtube and check out "Time After Time," since you mentioned it. Believe it or not, I remember when that was a #1 hit by Cyndi Lauper back in the 80's. (I'm showing my age with that statement. LOL!) And I am still hoping that tape doesn't get destroyed quite yet. Yeah, Hiei would probably go berserk if he saw how scared Kagome was on it, but, ... *rubs hands together in anticipation* it would be GREAT!! Heh heh! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: ChaoticKittiex3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 14:53 CDT
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you gotta update soon... or else... I'll unleash.... THE HAPPY HAMMER! >=0 =]
| Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awesome story plz continue
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 06:21 CDT
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Great chapter! Yay! I absolutely, positively LOVE the way you're writing Jakotsu and Bankotsu. You're keeping in those little details that make him true to character, like his bloodthirstiness and his inability to count. Wonderful! Nice touch having Kikyou hit on Kouga. She's such a sleeze. I can't wait until Inuyasha finds out about her extracurricular activities. LOL!! Seriously, they're such a sick couple -- they belong on the Jerry Springer show. LOL!! Glad to see Kagome is getting a little better. And she does seem to be confident about Hiei's feelings for her. I hope she and Keiko DO get to talk soon. It might make her feel better to know that Keiko realized immediately that Yusuke was threatening her because of how she looked on the tape. Of course, finding out there IS a tape is going to open a whole new can of worms, isn't it? Loved the sweet moments with Hiei and Kagome, and I can't wait to see if they run into Inuyasha at Sesshoumaru's dinner. Actually, I can't wait to see ALL of the things you have planned for this -- it's a great read. And you're handling the large cast of characters very, very well. Kudos, my friend!
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait to see what happens and to see who the stranger was....XD..please update soon...
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon....
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon...this story is very good....very unique...please update
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 19:03 CDT
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I was SO happy to see a new chapter of this story! And it was a winner, too. I still don't know quite how I feel about Yusuke. He's definitely the villain of the piece, but I keep feeling tiny twinges of sympathy for him. Really tiny. Hmmm. Interesting that Kagura's blathering started Inuyasha thinking about his relationship with Kikyo. I look forward to him finding out some harsh truths. But,as always, the BEST part of the chapter was Hiei and Kagome. I DID like Hiei and Kurama talking some more, especially since that led to her discovery about Yusuke being married. Drumroll please: and there it was! The anger! The anger that she had been used to hurt someone else. Oh, yes! And this should propel her recovery, I believe, won't it? Will she seek out the other woman? Or will Keiko find her through Yukina? I'd like for the women to get a little vengeance on their own. I really liked her reaction -- and I found Hiei's interesting. He didn't want her to get in trouble or end up in jail? Seriously, he didn't really think she could actually HURT Yusuke did he? I would think he'd be afraid if she attacked Yusuke that SHE would get hurt. And now Hiei knows for sure that she didn't know Yusuke was married -- though he pretty much assumed she didn't, just from knowing her character, --I'm sure it was a relief to have that confirmed. Back to his talk with Kurama. What did he think when Kurama told him he never expected to walk in on that situation at his house? I wonder if that is going to prompt some changes, too. I couldn't believe Kurama mentioned he wouldn't have done it at Yusuke's because it wouldn't have been unexpected. Considering the state of things, that's really rather sad. I love the way you are moving everything along in this. Strange to say, but it almost looks like this whole horrible event is going to EVENTUALLY have some positive repercussions in more than one relationship. Kag/Hiei are moving to a new level of trust/security/openness -- possibly towards greater commitment. Keiko will end up (we hope) with a better, more caring man. Yusuke will either grow up or get killed. Hey! It's all win-win! Heh heh! Great job!
| Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue
| Reviewed By: FrozenTearDrop [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! yet another beautifully constructed chapter! Keep it up!
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