| "Stains of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: K,T,M On: August 24, 2008 21:51 CDT
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yay i LOVE dis fic!!XD please update soon XD
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Reviewed By: xxsilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: August 23, 2008 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. that fight was amazing! i'm so excited for the next chapter now! great job.
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Title: YAY AWSOME STORY AND NO MORE OROCHIMARU
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 10:01 CDT
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Title: YAY AWSOME STORY AND NO MORE OROCHIMARU
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 10:01 CDT
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: clusterlizard1 woz not gone
Reviewed By: i cant be bothered signing in.. On: August 23, 2008 06:05 CDT
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wow... and YAY! Orochimaru is finally dead! and its warms my non existant heart to know that Houkou cares for Kagome... in some small way.. yay... and that fluffy scene, where (despite it being mildly false) Houkou said he'd take of her, that he would make the bad man go away forever. :) yay. ^^. good work on this chapter. i loved it (if you couldn't already tell). cant wait for the next one, and i will see(?) you then. ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: moonsharmony(unsigned) On: June 25, 2008 22:46 CDT
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I enjoy reading your story, especially since you don't have any annoying author notes or comments in the middle of the story interrupting the flow or any particular spelling or grammar issues that I've noted. Initially I was unsure about your story because of the odd way you cast Kagome. I never understand why people make fanfictions that completely destroy the original character without any actual reason. However, the personality you've given her makes sense within the setting. And it, in a way, preserves some of her essential characteristics. So I can still recognize the original character despite the different personality. I also like the level of detail you have. It's enough to give a good clear picture of what's going on without going into so much detail that the reader loses interest (at least I don't). And I just really love Inuyasha and Naruto crossovers. There just aren't enough well plotted ones (that actually get updated) out there.
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfics in general are some of my very favs, but this one holds a special place on my favorites list. Your attention to detail and brilliant fight scenes are just awesome! I do hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Yasu Amaya On: June 25, 2008 07:41 CDT
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I love it! Sorry I didn't rate but I don't get how the system works (Like is 1 the best or 10?)Anyways, this is probably the best damn KagomexGaara fic I've ever read....ever. You put so much creativity into it making up new skills and attacks for Kagome, and how Rin's a Seer..I love it, please update asps ^^
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 02:58 CDT
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eternal blood masacre... i love it. thw whole picture of tons of people just exploding, inards flying and blood painting the walls crimson.. oh wait, their not inside, oh well... blood coating trees is goos enough for me. great chapter, nice way of intergrating Sesshomaru into the story too. til next time ~clusterlizard1
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: hwewbnkjbnf On: June 17, 2008 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please tell me she isnt going to get the mark from orochimarou. that would ruin everything. kagome is free and does watever the hell she wants and that mark will just screw everything
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Reviewed By: El Ahrairah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... Is it Kikyo or Sango?
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Reviewed By: Magami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 20:05 CDT
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Amazing story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this violent selection that caused my skin to crawl
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 22:46 CST
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Yay! An update! I love how you have portrayed Rin so far. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 01:14 CST
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I like the story, Kagome's personality is intriguing to the point of ponderment. I still have this weird urge to see Naruto go Kyuubi-fied and bitch-smack Kagome with his claws, pun intended.
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon..I love your story!!
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