| "After The Four-Tails!" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Title: Please Continue!!!!
Reviewed By: VahnDeathHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well first of all I think you should continue the story. Second, with the question about the Sakura and Ino thing, well Sakura was Naruto's first crush, and Ino has always teased, so I think that they both could be put into the story but at seperate times. I wonder about Shizune getting in the picture, there is part of me wanting her to become part of the fic because she has had a large part to do in the first story, but there is also the part of where she is to busy being the Hokage's assistant (meaning she does all the work while Tsunade drinks). I have read this from the beginning and sorry as I am to say I didn't get my computer back until last November and had forgotten about the story until reviewing what I have read today, so please continue!!!!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol your flashback calls r funny and great fanfic u gotta keep updating man keep up ta great work this is goin un my favs
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Reviewed By: Train1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 20:29 CDT
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i kind of like your story keep on writing... I can't wait...it's really great...upadate soon
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 16:12 CDT
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I suppose it's easy to become perverted if you've never been exposed to sex before. Looks like innocent Hinata-chan won't be so innocent much longer. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Biyabo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Fantastic! Though that cliffhanger at the end of chapter three really killed me. If you don't post another chapter within a month I swear I'm going to start my own NaruHina fanfic xO lol
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 16:18 CDT
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hmm...interesting, hope to see more chapters.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 15:51 CDT
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That was a good chapter sorry to sound like I am complainning but this chapters was kinda shory compare to the other two but that is ok it was still good so who will be his other teammate other than Hinata I kinda hope it isn`t Sakura why is because I believe she will be nagging Naruto to get stronger so she can make sure he will keep his promise to bring that loser Sasuke back to her but with Ino i`m not sure how she feels about Sasuke now since hell I haven`t seen that far in the show I only saw what was shown on cartoon network so if he picks another girl to go I would love to see Ino go but if it is a guy now that will be hard to choose oh well its your story so it is up to you anyways please update soon and keep up the good work oh and have fun living in Va. I use to live there but I moved to Pa. and live out in the country where there are less ppl and it is quiet anyways keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 06:30 CDT
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What an ending for this chapter! I can't wait to hear the explanation behind that. Didn't Naruto say something about seeing Hinata as a sister earlier though? Anyway, I'm not sure if this was quite worth the long wait, but it was excellent nonetheless. Your an good writer. Don't doubt yourself.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: AJTalon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you update! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 15:03 CDT
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The story was good but oh well I guess I can go find other stories to read since this story won`t be updated anymore and if it does then I wouldn`t doubt the storyline will get screwed up so bad lol oh wellit was a good story anyways
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 13:53 CST
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Well this chapter was ok to me it seemd really short heck your last fic the chapters were long hell way way longer than this fic other than that it was ok so updae soon and please make the chapter alittle bit longer ohwell keep up the good work oh yeah and please make Shizune a spanky-buddy please
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Reviewed By: AKACHAN CHUX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL BEGINNING, I HOPE YOU FINISH IT LOOKS LIKE IT'S GONA BE A FUN STORY^_^ P.S. ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ SO FAR.
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 07:16 CST
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Shizune as a love interest or spanky-buddy? I like the sound of that. Update soon!
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Title: What about Shizune?
Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to Shizune? I got the feeling that she really cared about him from the last fic. Why would they just forget about each other? And for the record, if this must be NaruHina, adding Sakura to the mix can only make things better. Her overly abrasive personality balances out Hinata's timid one quite nicely.
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Reviewed By: randombugger On: February 13, 2007 20:14 CST
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poor Hinata, poor Jiraiya. good beginning.
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Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was pretty funny what Tsunade did to Ero-Sannin. this is a pretty good story and i can't wait for the next chapter. please have it soon.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 15:10 CST
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I thought this was a really good start and I would have loved it if it was Ino than Hinata but after reading this chapter I was wrong because I forgot that she would have never thought of Naruto like that and with Sakura wouldn`t good either because hell she is stuck up and only cares about herself and Sasuke so Hinata is a perfect pair for Naruto so please update soon because I can`t wait to read mre of this story and also I feel sorry for that assistant after getting hi in his family jewels by Hiata hell after I read that part I had to double over lol anyways keep up the good work and please update soon
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