| "Gone With the Wind." Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: oh no you're evil!
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 14:40 CDT
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i neeeeeeed more! omg omg omg! this was the hottest chapter ever. whew, i didn't care as much about the inuyasha group at first, but now i wanna know what's gonna happen with them as much as i care about keiko! please put the wii remote down, scarlet i neeeeeeeeeed more!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My only question is, why haven't you reached 30 reviews for this yet? This story is pretty good and very fresh. And I love my stories fresh. Anyway, I really like this character you've created in Keiko and especially like this little side adventure of Inuyasha and Kagome. I think you've found the fourth type of conflict in stories after Man vs Nature, Man vs Man, and Man vs Himself: Man vs Romance Novel. Geez, poor Inuyasha, bastard hardly had a chance. shakes head Overall, your writing style is good with the occasional error here and there, but they were mostly errors that are easily missed (beta reader or not). Characterization is great, especially surprising is how several of the background characters put their mark on the story even with little to no time spent on them. My only question is we're only on Ch 8 or 9 and Keiko and Sess seem to be accelerating to their inevitable consumation with Naraku still looming on the horizon (and his fingers still pulling on the strings of Kagura's reincarnation), so does Sess throw caution to the wind and go for it? Somehow, with how this story is developing, I don't think it will be quite that simple. Keep up the good work and get off that Wii already!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 23:14 CDT
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Very much into this story and can't wait for the updates. The foreplaying "HOT", it's going to be amazing when you actually write out a full encounter out for them.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 15:10 CDT
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so i read the summarry at the top...saw the word 'lemon' and rushed through the chapter...then i went back to the beginning and read it slowly...ewww! sigh girl you are so crazy lol, i'm at a loss for words here...i can't wait to see where this goes. he can't hide anything now not after what he did! so i can't wait ahhH!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 02:21 CST
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OMG This is the best chapter ever. I love the Kagura story, but this whole sub-plot with the romance novel is just killing me. It made me laugh too and it's so sweet. InuYasha's got some moves.
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 16:49 CST
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I don't know how politically correct it is to answer reviews in the reviews section but screw it :P Thanks for much for the positive feedback ..I was worried I was the only one having fun with this story :P I was a little huffy over the way this lemon turned out (I kinda skipped over it) but its the first of many. Sakura: I'm so glad I made you laugh..seriously....there is no better feeling then knowing I brought someone else happiness :) (even if it is slightly naughty in nature :P)
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Reviewed By: Sakura_Petals106 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an original. It really had me laughing, and I don't mean like those small cheap laughs either, I mean like those hard laughs where you just can't stop. It's really hard to make me laugh (at least when I'm reading anyways). But you did a very good job, very unique, I love it. I'd also like to point out that the (somewhat) lemony scene that you did in the last chapter was (in my opinion) unexpected, unlike other stories you just know it's going to happen, this really had kept me on the edge of finding out. Great work!!! You really show that you've put effort into this story and I hope that you continue with it.
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Reviewed By: Sakura_Petals106 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell ya, this story made me laugh really, really hard!!!! It is very funny!!!! Good job!!! I also like to point out that the creativity of the story was very unique and I enjoyed it a lot!!! I really hope you update soon, with a story like this you just can't stop.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 15:30 CST
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Hmm. Is he going to carry her or make her forget how much her legs hurt...or both? I got behind on my reading so I got to read these chapters together, lucky me. This is so cute and Kagura is one of my favourite characters. Usually she's not mentioned much in fanfics so this is a real treat to read. I'm so glad you like to update frequently and I like this story. (poor InuYasha btw-he might have some explaining to do)
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Title: can't review too long
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 22:26 CST
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but just wanted to say awesome!' and 'more!' luv it luv it luvit , gotta run!
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon (nli) On: February 20, 2007 17:12 CST
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I'm in love with this story, too! You are just too funny, you know that? After the bits about Yasha searching through her bag, the lotion and the romance novel (and I was wondering if it were, perhaps, adult manga), I thought that our teenage hanyou were up to something perverted. Sesshomaru pondering the size of his ass was absolutely priceless. Glad you've got the writing bug back - looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: wooo!
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 04:03 CST
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When i opened my email and saw this update, i squealed out loud...that was satisfiying... i liked the exchange between keiko and sesshomaru. by the way, what does her name mean? if you said it alreadly, i forgot, but i'll take a look again. does keiko look exactly like kagura? minus eyeshadow of course...because kagome and kikyo never looked tha tmuch alike to me, but for some reason peopl couldn't tell them apart. anyway. this was awesome, glad you are updating so quickly, can't wait for more!
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Title: nooooooooooo!
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 06:16 CST
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I need more! this is really good. girl you just get better and better. I can't wait...no advice for you really...lol longer chapters? but seriously, this is perfect so far.
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Title: no problem with spoilers.
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
but you put the spoiler right in the summary! be careful with those things. other than that...this lloks really good and interesting. i think i will enjoy this new take on the kagura/sesshomaru stories. update soon, and have a good weekend!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 03:33 CST
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Oooh! This sounds interesting.
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