| "Gone With the Wind." Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: Final
Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was amazing! I love happy endings (almost had a Miroku thought ^^)… you managed to keep a nice flow through out the story. I read it in a couple of days… I don't usually like to read completed stories that are this long but I couldn't resist after the first chapter. Characterization was great… I loved how you showed glimpses of Sesshoumaru's soft side without losing his usual personality. I have seen so many Sess/Kag stories and it was refreshing to read something different and original done in such a wonderful way. Your writing is so well put together with the exception of some misused words here and there. My favorite part that stood out to me was in Chapter 17, the dream sequence… besides the deviousness of Naraku how you wrote it was amazing. I love your humor and how you still keep it hot… I enjoyed reading your work. I can't wait to see how "The Enchanted Obi" will turn out.
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 00:29 CDT
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I am on chapter 15 and so far, I love the story! Going back to reading… ^^
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Title: THANKS SO MUCH!
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 21:34 CDT
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I had th eworst day, when i checked my email i had my fingers crossed, i breathed a sigh of relief when i saw the alert! thanks so much! lol i'm ognna actually read it now, will review tomorrow! :-P
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Title: I love this so much!
Reviewed By: InuKiKei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't stop reading!! I so, so, so, SO loved the whole thing with Keiko giving Sesshomaru the finger, I could just see it in my head clear as day!! I loved the whole thing with the romance novel too, its nice to see someone who really gets how innocent InuYasha and Kagome are but at the same time, aren't, and you kept them perfectly in character.
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Title: sigh...
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 04:56 CDT
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sigh of satisfaction. i can sleep easy now that i've had my addiction...it was an amazing lemon, i can't wait fo rkeiko/sessh.....shivering with anticipation.
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Title: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 10:16 CDT
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oh my god this is crazy! what was up with the dream that was naraku tryign to get her to respond to him? or was it more than that? i can't wait for the rest! thanks!
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Title: here I go again
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 23:29 CDT
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Thanks for all the great reviews! I'm pleased to announce that the story is coming to a conclusion soon (a few more chapters) Next chapter is going to be the big action scene..so it may take me a little longer *hearts and kisses to all* Scar
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 22:58 CDT
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Hmmm. I got behind on my reading again and just finished chapters 14, 15, and 16. For once I am glad that it worked out that way because to have had to wait between your postings of these would have been unbearable. I love this story. I don't understand why there aren't more people reviewing. Your OC is a good one and the whole Kagura re-incarnation aspect isn't overdone or cutesy. Ah well, most of the best things in life are acquired tastes and so it may be with Keiko. Your writing has changed though, in a good way. In the first couple of chapters of this fic there were a few too many adjectives and because of that a little redundancy. Your writing has tightened back up and it feels as though you've either gotten your stride or the story has carried you off with a life of its own. However it has occurred, it's great. You're back to your original style and your phrasing is right on the mark. Your characterizations are so apt, and it's not just the voice, the descriptions you give to the emotions of each individual are so...gush, gush, gush. I am about to find myself littering my review with too many adjectives and redundancies. Your story is wonderful.
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon(nli) On: March 18, 2007 02:43 CDT
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Poor Keiko, it sounds like Sesshou has found a new amusement, and at her expense, no less. Though, if I were perched on his shoulder and feeling the vibrations of his voice (quite the yummy thought, there, thank you), I don't think I'd call it hell!
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon(nli) On: March 18, 2007 01:56 CDT
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Oooooh, so sweet! I hope that Sessh can work out a comfortable carrying arrangement for their walk tomorrow! And I can't wait to read Kagome's reaction to her poor, abused novel. Ok, on to the next chapter!
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Title: sexy
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 20:01 CDT
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that was so hot...you cut it off in the right place though..it's a cliffy, bu at least i got my half of a lemon yay! excited for the rest. eager to see what naraku has to say also...and lol how long DOES it take to mend a kimono?
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 06:47 CDT
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An absolute 20 on a scale of 1-10. Gotta give us more, Inu and Kagome really need to hurry and get it on before they spontaneously combust. Sess and Keiko also need to upgrade to a Rated R and then a nice long NC-17 (smile). Read ya later.
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Title: shamelessly chatting in reviews
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 16:04 CDT
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ha ha..I just finished writing half of chapter 16 looks like I'll be snowed in this weekend so I should be able to finish the darn thing soon :P Thanks for the wonderful reviews! I was a little apprehensive about 15...but I'm glad to see people liked it...more lemons coming in 16...dualing lemons actually O.o Such things are inevitable as the story approaches its climax :P
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Title: oh no you're evil!
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 14:40 CDT
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i neeeeeeed more! omg omg omg! this was the hottest chapter ever. whew, i didn't care as much about the inuyasha group at first, but now i wanna know what's gonna happen with them as much as i care about keiko! please put the wii remote down, scarlet i neeeeeeeeeed more!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My only question is, why haven't you reached 30 reviews for this yet? This story is pretty good and very fresh. And I love my stories fresh. Anyway, I really like this character you've created in Keiko and especially like this little side adventure of Inuyasha and Kagome. I think you've found the fourth type of conflict in stories after Man vs Nature, Man vs Man, and Man vs Himself: Man vs Romance Novel. Geez, poor Inuyasha, bastard hardly had a chance. shakes head Overall, your writing style is good with the occasional error here and there, but they were mostly errors that are easily missed (beta reader or not). Characterization is great, especially surprising is how several of the background characters put their mark on the story even with little to no time spent on them. My only question is we're only on Ch 8 or 9 and Keiko and Sess seem to be accelerating to their inevitable consumation with Naraku still looming on the horizon (and his fingers still pulling on the strings of Kagura's reincarnation), so does Sess throw caution to the wind and go for it? Somehow, with how this story is developing, I don't think it will be quite that simple. Keep up the good work and get off that Wii already!
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