| "Behind Green Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 22:01 EDT
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this chapter was good. i lyk how close harry & draco have gotten. lol. i cant wait 2 read chapter 3. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: LCAR313 On: April 11, 2007 03:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so fun and entertaining i just love it
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Reviewed By: amber v On: April 09, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love your story. It seems like you know who you want your characters to be. I feel bad for Harry when they get back to the real world. I hope to see his defences come back a little although what you've done with him, Draco, and especially the founders. I can't wait to read more of this story, and did thank you for the long chapters yet.
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Reviewed By: Auroawinter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. The orginality of it and all.. Im excited to see where this story goes.. Ja ne
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Title: Luv you!
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 22:54 EDT
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Ohmigod! I love you for how funny this chapter is! I love it!!!! The bath scenes are hilarious and Snape's changes are really funny. I like how Draco gets mad when Snape hugs Harry! Update with chapter three soon! I don't have much to read!
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Title: Dream Keeper
Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh WOW... I LOVE this fic. Please update again soon! Don't wait til your spring break. I can't wait that long. I really want to know what happens next. How do the three react to eachother? When does Draco realize he's Harry's mate, not someone else? Update again soon, please? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 16:26 EDT
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Wow, this story has such promise. Though I'm a bit concerned by how fast Snape, Draco and Harry are becoming a team, even if you try to slow it down. It's obvious, so it makes it okay, somewhat. 'Course, I can always just pin it down to the teenage hormones and the possibility of Draco being his mate, which I don't doubt. I'm hoping you'll address how the founders were able to be in bodies, unless they were talking to them via a portrait when they discussed about Harry being an elf. Other than that, the story is nice so far. I can't wait for the eventual forray to the rest of Hogwarts, including Ron and Hermione. I'm looking forward especially that. And as for Hermione stealing magic, I haven't heard/read that excuse as a way to make Hermione 'mean' to Harry in fanfic. So, you get originality points for that. Not so sure about Dumbledore though, I know another commenter said that it's believable, but I don't think it is. 'Course, it's really early to tell and we haven't seen Dumbledore yet, so I'll hold my judgement on that. I mean, I know that it's a given that he sends Harry back to the Dursleys simply because of the blood protection. But is it enough to warrant Harry's abuse? -shrugs- It's your call, really. Looking forward to another nice, long chapter. =)
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 08:25 EDT
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I'm glad that the chapter was really long. I really enjoyed it and I'm loving the wa ythat Draco and Harry are bonding. IT'S SO ADOREABLE!!!! update soon need to read more
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Reviewed By: DeniseE On: March 10, 2007 01:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far. It's nice to have a mean Dumbledore that's actually believable. I like your writing style as well. One question though- in the 5th book, doesn't the Room of Requirement change for harry when he needs it too? Please review soon.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 23:54 EST
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GREAT STORY!!! Really interesting and you got a really good plot going. I really am likin it. HOPE YOU CONTINUE WRITING IT. update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 00:45 EST
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this is reeeeeeeaaaalllllllllllllyyyyyy interesting & good. its also very realistic. i look forward 2 reading the rest of the story. update soon plz.
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Title: (*claps hands*)
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 12:23 EST
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Good...and...AWESOME! It's great! Loving the first chapter and hoping that you finish the second soon. All of the twists and turns in this one is really sucking me in! (*HOLD HANDS OUT*) More plz!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 01:07 EST
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Story is good, though I'll say this, Harry being abused far more than shown in the novels, is realistic. Neh. Anyway, I look foward to more chapters (as this one is a damn good intro to your story). Anyway, keep up the good work, and update soon, kk? Later
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Reviewed By: katrinadax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 20:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good so far! I'm anxious to see what happens next! Please keep up the good work and update soon. Cya
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