| "Sounds of a new Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: LancerLead [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 16:35 CDT
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If it was me, keep Kurenai with the womanizer. I don't know what it is but Kakashi + Rin just sings right to me. Love it so far!
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 21:20 CDT
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I think Rin should go to Kakashi. Ginshin has enough women as it is. Otherwise, great work. I'd like to see more of that Rekka girl.
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Reviewed By: Gaara-Is-The-Best [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT JOB...i love this story keep up the great work....and i say rin needs to end up with kakashi
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Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chap. i also agree with ziggy on the name. as for the powers, i always like the idea of a judgement power. where you could see into someone's soul and see if they should die or not. you don't hav to use it. it is just an idea. can't wait for the next chap. plz update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 20:55 CDT
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This is the last day of spring break T_T. For Naruto's doujutsu, how about Higuregan. Higure means Twilight. I thought this would be fitting because ying ang yang are light and darkness. Also good job on the doujutsu thought, but I seriously doubt that 'revolution eye' is a good name. Keep up the good work! Ja!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 15:55 CST
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Out of all the girls in the Harem, I wanted Sakura to kiss him the most. 2 Days 'till spring break! Please update
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 09:42 CST
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You must keep this going. I can't survive without it! I have Spring break soon, I'll been on the computer all the time. So please UPDATE THIS AS MUCH AS YOU CAN!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. Keep this going! Update!
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 13:13 CST
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Good chapter! And to answer the polls, Ayame should be in the harem and you should definitely develope the relationships some more before the Tsunade arc.
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Reviewed By: seilif [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really good fic. I like it. I;ve been following you since you started and I can honestly say, I like the way you're developing the characters. Just look out for punctuation and other spelling mistakes and you;ll do better. Keep it up! -seilif
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm with Zigyy on this one. This is interesting.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 19:42 CST
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Awsomeness. Give me knuckles. Keep this story going no matter what please. I really like this story.
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Reviewed By: rasengan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice story im starting to like storys where naruto is a sound shinobi
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Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story. i also like the sitar very nice touch. probably won't like this but if you fix the sitar here is a jutsu: Wind Release: Sonic Reverb. sends out a short range of sound around the user. good for multiple close range enimies. again it is just a suggestion. can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon.
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