| "Yakunan Rijun" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 20:49 CDT
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*winces* Ouch, lots of people die. Depressing future...Makes it all the more suspenseful though! XP Interesting chapter! Loved how Celestine was joking around about the sibling thing. XDDD "Oh, I'm one in a hundred." XP Can't wait to read more! I hope they manage to kick Angel of Death's can soon!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 09:41 CDT
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Sweet! I can't wait until you update!
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Title: Good filler
Reviewed By: The Sabercat named Charon On: April 20, 2007 15:06 CDT
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That's about it. Good filler. And thanks for including my joke!
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 05:15 CDT
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x33;;;; Geez, the future sucks, huh? That's cute Celestin has the last piece of Zero's cape and Fleur's feather... D: Poor Captain's dead, wah! *huddles Baku* -.- You no die too...! For now. ^^; Heheheh. You're a character, Celestin. Twin... Pffttt...Very amusing chapter, update again asap! *loves~*
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 19:19 CDT
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Wow, lot's of confusion and answers here, huh? XP I like that name, Celestin! Pretty name! X3 Anyways, nice chapter and a good fighting scene. *ignores the OOCness* I figured Rubbish was a time sprite. Sprites are fun. XP Can't wait for the next update!
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Title: It's okay
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat (listening to Phil Collins) On: April 10, 2007 21:10 CDT
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Nice bit of exposition. Cy's got a handy trait of ruining his own plans. I like that. Anyway, I'm hungry. Later!
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Reviewed By: MVG1 (too... stupid to log in ;D) On: April 10, 2007 14:50 CDT
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Oh *censrhymeswithduckored*! D: I still wanna know what happens to the Gundam Force in the future... why doesn't Angel of Death just, I dunno, kill them off here in the past? Are they -god forbid- USEFUL alive in the future? Well, I guess we'll find out soon enough. OOCness is okay, I know you've had a hard weekend. n_n Make a sketch of Celestin whenever you can so maybe I can fancify it. x3 (also, something that took me a bit to figure out, when you mentioned something about gold flecks in his wings...? I think you need some commas there or else it comes off as "some wings" ._.; Yeah... I'd figured he had "some wings" xD~) Update asap! :3
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 11:56 CDT
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This is awesome! I can't wait for you to update!
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Title: Kewl!
Reviewed By: Sayla On: April 10, 2007 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done! Haha, Zero cussed. Update soon.
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Title: Hiya!
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicley done! The Gundams need to listen to Thief more often (he was right!)
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Reviewed By: Kichiko_the_winged_musha On: March 31, 2007 20:48 CDT
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ahh, yes! caught up!! OH MAN AWESOME! hee hee thinking of girls catfighting over Baku makes me giggle! And Gio is Zero and Fleur's son? ABDHGSDGHD YES! I LOVE STORIES LIKE THIS! *glomps Celestin (much better name btw)*aww, cute 'lil second gen ^^ much Kudo's to the latest chapter! Though I do have to inform you of a very big reoccuring typo. When Baku is decribing his swords, you put 'Scared' as in 'my scared swords'. Unless you mean that the swords are frightened, I believ the term your looking for is 'sacred' ^^; not to be snobby or anything, but the typo was just bugging me alot. so yea. CONTINUE! moosh
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I caught up! I caught up! *faints* Ack, you post faster than I can read...Of course, I've been gone so much... >_> Awesome chapters! I can see the plot develope a lot now. Hahaha, Baku's got a bunch of girls hitting on him. XD Who would've known? Oooo, so Gio is Zero and Fleur's kid, eh? Yeah, might be a little wise to change the name. Nothing too bad, since the name was mentioned only once. ^^;;; I look forward to another update!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 10:32 CDT
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SWEET! I suspected time travel at the beginning of this chapter. This is such an awesome story! Update soon! I comand you! Uh... please?
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 10:22 CDT
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Sweet! Poor Gio! *pats his head*
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 10:09 CDT
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Sweet! This was so awesome! On to the next chapter I go!
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