| "Mind, Body & Spirit" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, well written and good character portrayle
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Reviewed By: S.D. On: September 19, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I don't read straight pairings, but that was very well done. Good job! Spirit Dragon
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Reviewed By: NYLACE [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. You write good stories. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 03:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*let's out squeals of glee* .....eeeeeekkkk that was so good....... sigh... wish i had a veggie of my very own *drool* |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 16, 2002 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh god, that story was SO great!! I swear, it was romantic, sexy , ooh and so intense, I love the way you made the characters!!!!!!!!! I swear, girlie, this is one of the best fics I have ever read, I really liked it a lot!!!!
the ending was great as well, you got talent missy, I love B/V and escpecialy this one.
the lemon was great, hehe I love it when Veggie is teasing, I loved the scene where she masturbated on his back!! hehe that was great *dreamy look*
my compliments!
kiss. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 03:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
now that was an interesting take on the 'bond' I like that.. Vegeta's just so damn cocky and sexy.. its just purrrrfect |
Reviewed By: cherry On: June 14, 2002 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this steamy fanfic>^_^I can believe what Bulma did to sexy veggie-chan. Great job! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 14, 2002 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Mary Jesus!! That was wonderful! I love Veggie's reaction when Bulma had to clean up the mess she made on his back-LOL. The whole story was super. Great job gg! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! Another great lemon again Goku's girl, ah hell all of em are good. XD Your lemons tend to get people all hot and bothered. *wink*
Keep up the great work and lemon-iness. Bura |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 06, 2002 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deliciously evil chapter. Poor Bulma is going nuts cause of her "Veggie cravings", and Vegeta is such a damn tease. I don't know how she's been able to resist him. I wonder what she'll have to do in return ^_~. Great chap. Oh yeah, last time I reviewed I forgot to put my name. Like I said before your lemons have a major affect on me. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 23:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Meeeaaaaannnn!
That's wicked wild stuff ^^; |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, kinky! Well,I think its a great fic so far. Dig the whole sickness thingy, and the insomia. But I wonder what Vegeta will want from Bulma...(sneaky grin) |
Reviewed By: Mind, Body and Spirit On: May 28, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chap. I've already read this at FFN but I don't think I ever reviewed it, along with most of your B/V fics. I loved them all, but your lemons have a way of making me forget to review and instead I end up haaving to take cold showers. You are definitely the Queen of Lemons, nobody does them better. My favorite, "From Baths To Babies", comes to mind when I think of an ultra intense lemon. I was barely able to write a review cause I was exhausted from reading it ^_~. Anyway, I'll make up for it by starting to review the chaps as you post them. Again, great job!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin no Hime On: May 27, 2002 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! I love it Vegeta is entirely wicked. I would love if you could put me on your mailing list Saiyajin_no_Hime@hotmail.com Thanks, I really enjoyed the first chapter please continue. |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! *hugs poor Bulma*
*shakes a finger at Veggie* Now, now, play nice, children.
^_^ Anyways, I love it so far! Can you tell me when the next chap comes out? Maxchick@mad.scientist.com ;) I never thought of B/V that way.. Vegeta being the one to make the move. Very original! ^_~ I love it! |
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